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the tid bit at the end is hilarious anyways please update soon, Im enjoying the fic so very much^^

that is a great ending to that fict ! Keep it up !

Awwww, so sweet! ^__^ I personally can see either man being seme, perhaps switching off, but I like how you wrote this. I love these two together, and you\'ve managed to convey so much of their life with just a few paragraphs. Awesome!

Only thing I don\'t get is the reference to Tachibana at the end...

Oh, I really liked this. :3 Kazuma being the uke is....rather hot.

You wrote this well, and I really hope to see more in the future. My only complaint is that it was too short. But, hey, it was just the first chapter... Anyway, loved it. ;3

Very cute@@@@ Hope to see a second chapter soon!!!

I liked this, I hope you continue. I could so imagine Kazuma as the submissive one. ^_^ Keep up the good work, Bye. ^_^

Aww... heheheh, that was cute. I\'m such a sucker for fluff. ^_^ Yeah, I can see Ryuhou wanting revenge for being called the C-word...Kazuma probably would too, for that matter. I liked how you described the relationship between the two boys--they both seemed very in character. Anyway, good fic--definitely brought a smile to my face first thing in the morning! Other than a few little typos, the only thing I didn\'t get was the mention of Tachibana at the very end; since he wasn\'t mentioned anywhere else, that just seemed kind of out of place. It seems like you\'re leaving this open for further chapters--if so, I\'m definitely looking forward to reading more!