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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
im sorry but that was so lame
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One tip for the future:
a) Make a rape warning before you have someone read a fic like this.
That was cruel and harsh and very offending to people who had been raped by immediate/non related family members. Make a rape warning before letting people read a fanfic like this. If you had made the warning in the summary, then this would have been fine, but be considerate next time.
a) Make a rape warning before you have someone read a fic like this.
That was cruel and harsh and very offending to people who had been raped by immediate/non related family members. Make a rape warning before letting people read a fanfic like this. If you had made the warning in the summary, then this would have been fine, but be considerate next time.
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
is it possible for you to actually have a chapter where Darien's friends do end up having sex with Serena?
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Quite crude and very harsh.
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December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok first of all, this fan fiction was gross and horrible, I'm a huge Darien and Serena fan, and i so do not think that Darien would abuse her like that i mean, you could have made it a bit better many, have her be happy or enjoy it, or something or maybe even let her fall inlove with him, but this story was just sick, and Diamond would never be darien's friend, as well, i think u kinda should have said there would be rape, and this story was just nasty. so i thank u, thank u for ruining darien's and serena's love. And as well, Darien is a sick fuck, to do this to his stepsister, who is just about his sister,,,,, So this story was just sick and disgusting.
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was very good, you sould totally make this in to a series!!
well please think about , and i look forward to more!!!!!
well please think about , and i look forward to more!!!!!
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello...
I like stories with smut and romance. This tale of yours...was half erotic, half unkewl. The difference between rape and ravishing: Ravishing=The hero forces the heroine to submit to his seduction, they both r attracted to/love each other, and they both enjoy it. Rape=Darien in this story. He enjoyed it. Serena didnt. He was a dick about it. :P
Could you please write future chappys in which hes nicer to her, and she grows to love him and sex?
Just a suggestion...
I like stories with smut and romance. This tale of yours...was half erotic, half unkewl. The difference between rape and ravishing: Ravishing=The hero forces the heroine to submit to his seduction, they both r attracted to/love each other, and they both enjoy it. Rape=Darien in this story. He enjoyed it. Serena didnt. He was a dick about it. :P
Could you please write future chappys in which hes nicer to her, and she grows to love him and sex?
Just a suggestion...
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK!!!!!! i can\'t believe you had Darien rape Serena! I have always been a big Dare/Sere fan but this is not what i expected. Maybe you should make her fall for him or something! Just please don\'t abuse her anymore