rate_review Reviews

great story!

What a great story. Schuldich and Yohji were terribly well done. Yohji's glimpses of uncertainty were very delicately done. You did a great job of characterizing Yohji through a little dialogue and action. Schuldich's self-denial was really nicely done. The rules gave the story a lot of cohesion; it wasn't confusing at all, which is unusual when switching between present-day and flashbacks. The light-handed angst was really good. And such a passionate story! One of my all-time favorites.

How terribly sad! Well written though. I\'m just a sucker for happy or potentially happy endings. :)

I just love a good schu x yohji story. this isn\'t all? i mean you\'re not going to just leave it there. i wanted to know more about
this vision bradley had. will schu give up on his happiness with yohji so easily. come on. up can\'t leave us hanging. bu
it was a great story. i hope you do decide to do more.