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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was well written. i liked the tone although i think the pace was little fast. i think the story could have been deeper, as it hinted at some of Sanzo\'s angst, but is ok where it is. i not sure why but Sanzo distancing himself, even during sex, is really erotic. yet sad at the same time. i almost pitied Sanzo. the boy being so skinny concerned me and made me uncomfortable. i think i was left with an overall feeling of being uncomfortable. unsatisfied. empty maybe. and i think Sanzo was too.