rate_review Reviews

I actually came on to this sight looking for a particular fic, and ended up engrossed in yours. This is beautiful. Normally, hard yaoi isn't my thing (don't ask why I came onto this site...:P), but I found your story to be utterly gentle even in its explicit nature. I could see every detail: the way Hakkai and Gojyo look at each other with such passion, Hakkai's gymnast-like movements, Goku's absolute devotion to Sanzo, and I could feel Sanzo healing as the fic went on. Thank you very much for writing this and wonderful job.

only one word. wow.

i dont normally read group sex... well, whatever...

you are one wonderful writer.
snow and i exchanged a few comments on your inuyasha fic - and then i find this.

wow.

OMFG...That was amazingly well written. That's like all I can say now 'cause my mind is all befudled. ^.^;

this fanfic was fucking hot please write more i especially loved the fact that it was all four of them. i would also love to read a fic about goku, goyjo, hakkai, sanzo and kougaji. i think that would also be a really hot story.
you are a very good writer and i would love to read many more stories written by you.

I loved this story so much that I had to print it and take it home. You are an awesome writer. I love the way you think.

I\'d have given you props for the explaination of the title alone, but this was a fun read. Parts were a little hard to follow when it came to who was doing what to whom, but that\'s ok. It was really sweet. Thank you for sharing your talent and (please!) keep writing.

i think this story is one of the best Saiyuki fics i\'ve ever read!^__^ i hope you\'ll write more of this!

That kicked so much ass. Really. I have never loved a group-sex fic this much, of any sort. The way things went down, the way Gojyo and Hakkai were clearly lovers, and how everyone knew Goku meant the most to the monk and they were left to themselves at the end, the way Hakkai knew to have Goku come in later because Sanzo would have been too weirded out at first, everything made sense, made it that much more perfect, and damn did I love it. Gorgeous sex, and everything believable. Bravo. I am still in amazed shock. And so happy you kept the couples even if they all enjoyed themselves together.