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for Whisper in the Water

by phantomness

person anonymous
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this wuz awesome!
person Kyuubi-Chick
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! x3
person Torin
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, you are twisted. But that\'s alright, cause twisted people make the best lemons XD

I look forward to your other work!
person An Idiot
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Quite interesting. I thought that was well done. I especially liked how you worked with Vaporeon. Nice.
person Church
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DUDE UR THE GREATEST I LOVE UR WORK!!! btw i favor Ash/(a very good female pokemon) pairing very much i so love beast lol make more please!!!
person Immortal King
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I Like ur work oh um excuse me actually i love it! but please put more details and stuff during the sex schenes oh and uh more blowjobs for ash please and can u remake this story and put some more touches?
person umber
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it ^^ will it be continuous? i certinly hope so its really good
person Nikanoru
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Creative, I\'ll give you that. But if you write a story where the main theme is sex, you should draw out the scenes, be more descriptive.
person Nikanoru
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Creative, I\'ll give you that. But if you write a story where the main theme is sex, you should draw out the scenes, be more descriptive.
person EbOnY-LyCaN14
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If liking this story makes me twisted, then consider me the most twisted person on the planet, ha ha. I really enjoyed it, so please continue, i will keep reading!!!!

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