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AWWWWWWWWW!!!!! That was so cute!! I LOVE these two, they're my absolute favorite couple ever! Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful piece.

awww..very cute and sweet! I love the descriptions of the outfits and how they complimented their skin tones. And the cuteness of them eating the muffins, even thought they were little burned. Nice job! :)

So cute. I love them. Great fic. Look forward to reading your future works. Until next time, take care, and god bless.

Brilliant writing. I've just recently started reading Haru wo Daiteita, and absolutely love the series! You've astutely captured Katou's playfulness, and Iwaki's inner reflections... I do hope you'll be continuing with this fanfic... it's too good to let go! :)

Awww this was cute. I love those guys, and the story is pretty romantic, please write more!!!

Aw! These two are so cute!

Hullo! not to ruin your story, but if its the picture I'm thinking of, thats a shuucream -- its like a little mini cream puff. I doubt anyone actually bakes them, they're readily available in even a regular supermarket and VERY yummy. But shhh I won't tell if you don't! (its also a picture on one of the covers.) I'm just happy to see anything in this section, I love this series so much. I think i've read it through 3 or 4 times now. The artbook came out a week before I left Japan so I had to rush out and get it. Anyway, I can't say your story blew me away, but it was a cute short, and very much the type of thing I can imagine illustrated as one of the little harudaki shorts. Although, I should probably warn you that Japanese people as a general rule don't have ovens. ^_^; Or well, they do but they're basically toaster ovens or microwave ovens with an 'oven' setting. So you usually only can make a few of anythign at a time, 6 small muffins for example. and i do mean small. Although I don't think you were too specific in your story so i'm sure that part is all right! Thanks for posting this!