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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I think you could do with a beta to fix spelling and grammar, and give suggestion on general plot. Also it would be nice if you could get the characters' names correct - Meowth is not 'meoth' and who is 'Brook'? I think you mean 'Brock' right?
Brock and Misty don't hate each other either, and Ash is a 16 year old boy, I highly doubt he has a 10 inch cock. And I also, James felt pain before he ejactulated? What the fuck??
Brock and Misty don't hate each other either, and Ash is a 16 year old boy, I highly doubt he has a 10 inch cock. And I also, James felt pain before he ejactulated? What the fuck??
schedule
November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well ok..sort of out there