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July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. Continue with it and i'll grant you three wishes *that will undoubtable not come true*
Rockin sex scenes had me fanning myself off.
Keep up the good Work babe.
Ciao!
Rockin sex scenes had me fanning myself off.
Keep up the good Work babe.
Ciao!
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July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MIMIs such a liar, you CAN TELL, please update soon
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July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its obvious that mimi wants izzy so she must break them up, am I right, or for the next chapter they could always play the jealousy game, izzy takes mimi to make YOLIE jealous, you could always take that route, continue soon
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, liked the whole backstabbing/intrigue thing you've got going on this chapter--evil place to end though. What the heck with not writing me to tell me you posted? I'm sorry things have been hectic for you. Hope to hear from you soon, and hope to read your next chapter soon.
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter (2)...U gonna continue right???
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Truly awesome. Far too many half-assed stories around here. Nice to see something so well done.
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not a huge fan of I/Y, but I\'m seriously liking this story! I really hope you continue it, it holds much promise, I can already tell. And that sex scene was HOT, I didn\'t know Yolei could be so kinky, heh. Hope you write more. b^^
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just got back from a mini-trip and here\'s a new chapter waiting for me. I loved it. She was adorable and the mouse thing was pretty hot. One thing though--after she told him that she was on the pill, did he take the condom off or did he fuck her with it anyway? Let me know when the next chapter is up, this is a fun project.
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, it was wonderful! Keep up the great work! *_* I had stars in my eyes the WHOLE time!
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heeheeheeee...awesome! ^^ lol That whole \'prodigious\' thing was cute, haha. =-P It was also interesting that Izzy\'s favorite hardware was involved in the sexual encounter, giving it a five out of five rating! Way to go...can\'t wait for more! ^,~