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for Breaking the Ice

by nikokun

person Crimson
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was...odd. I really don\'t know what else to say. I enjoyed the lead up more than the...ahem...climax. And though the end had a certain ring to it I still felt a little cheated, like I had missed something, or that something had been held back. Do you intend to continue this? Maybe it was Hakkai\'s apathy that bothered me. The story wants...more.
person fuzzybunnytoo
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
seems out of caracter but what happens next?

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