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for Birth Rite

by tsutsuji

schedule June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I reeeally hate doing this kind of thing, but I have to ask in this case: will there ever be more of Birth Rite written, or should I resign myself to crying a little and then moving on? The thing is, I love your stories to bits, the Slayers-related ones in particular, but I haven't seen even a ghost of activity here in forever. Is the dream really over? Should I not come back here anymore? It breaks my fic-loving heart to ask, but I need to know. I apologize if my words have offended you; I just needed to get them out.
schedule April 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So very much looking forward to the next chapter! I'm more intrigued with each paragraph, and if "Poison" was any indication of your plot-weaving skills, I believe I can expect quite a few more surprises as the story progresses.
schedule February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(Chapter 15) ZEL IS GOING TO GET IT! SO HARD! omg, he's really asking for it.

Milly seems fun! And for some reason, I feel like his plain and unimpressive appearance is something he did on purpose? If you don't want to be impressive, be as unimpressive as possible. XD
schedule February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(Chapter 11 review) Hee! Somehow I think distracting Zel isn't going to be as easy as he thinks.
schedule February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(Chapter 12 review) HAHA! I just knew Zel would catch on eventually. "Thinking in his sleep" thus proving that Zel does indeed think too much. Xellos, you're not doing your job! And their morning practise session went rather well. I'm glad Xellos isn't just using it as an excuse for sex, but is actually trying to help Zel get stronger in astral power.
schedule February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(chapter 13) Haha! Zel was really bored, he just doesn't want to admit it. And them getting in trouble for their lover's quarrel/training was amusing too.

After what we learned about the Claire Bible in Rev-Evo, does it change your feelings about this chapter at all?
schedule February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(Chapter 14) Aw, Myona's sweet, I'm glad the boys are letting him hang out with them for awhile. And yes, Xellos, when you have Zel in a tub, naked and eager, your mind should really be on the present! They are such newlyweds.
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm up to chapter six now! And I totally didn't see it coming that Martina was the author, but it works. XD
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw, that's sweet. Xel was so conflicted but Zel figured it out - such a smart boy - and made it better. Onto next chapter...
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay, cat boy! So cute. ^^; And yay, vengeful!Zel. Still enjoying it.

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