rate_review Reviews

Okay, a few things off here. One, Yukito is already very familiar with the layout of the Kinomot household by the time the last card is sealed and Yue released(he\'s studied with Touya in Touy\'s room on more than one occasion!). Two, Sakura\'s father, Fujitaka, is an Archaeologist, not an Architect!(An Architect designs things, primarily buildings. An Archaeologist studies the past.) And three, Kero saw Sakura naked prior to the sealing of the last card, probably more than once. There\'s on episode during the first \"season\" where the two are talking about stuff while she\'s taking a bath; we don\'t actually see anything except her back from the waist up, but the point is she was nude, which makes sense since, after all, she was taking a bath! Okay, I\'m done...laters.

And not a word about me leaving the second \"o\" off of Kinomoto! My finger just slipped, yeah...

yep, i\'m reviewing my own chapter again... i changed my penname if any of you were actually asking

i put up the chapter in a hurry because i won\'t be able to updat much in the next few days, so it\'s kind of an early preasent... i\'m really pleased with this chapter, as i managed to cram the stuff i wanted into just six or seven pages on microsoft word on a size 9 arial font... i\'m very very pleased indeed...

anyway, next chappie Syao makes a formal appearanc so tune in...

ada-chan

this doesn\'t seem so much as an appealing story.... but i\'m willing to give it a try... i think i want to see what\'s going to happen... tips: 1)there are a few little spelling errors... i think... 2) please describe the characters more

yeah, that\'s all

Omg. Add a chapter!!!!!!! I can\'t wait to read on! update update update!!!

Nice twist on the normal Sakura and Syaoran tales! Very creative. As always, I\'m not a fan of pseudo-Japanese talk, either write in Japanese or English in my opinion, but I am very interested to read the next chapter! Keep it up.

okay... i\'m reviewing my own story... this isn\'t one of my best... and it\'s the first time i actually tried to write here in AFF... i\'ve mostly been seen in FFF but yeah... my friends have read some of the later chapters and say it\'s funny... even though i don\'t see how... either way... review because this fic is worth reviewing... :D