rate_review Reviews

Not bad. Not bad at all. Not enough of this around, I have to say. Viva la fanfiction.

Yours is the first fanfic I have read in a very long time that kept me so interested that I didn't skim. You made me feel so many emotions, anger, confusion, and at the end pure joy. The dialogue flowed so naturally and everything seemed to fit. The jealousy between Misty and May kept the tension up during the entire fic and you had me quite worried that in the end he was going to choose Misty, especially since she apparently reciprocated his feelings! Yours is also the first Ash/May story that made any sense and didn't leave my mind bumbled by the fast advances and stupid dialogue. And you actually had a bit of a plot within the story, rather than other lemons that just want to have the characters do the deed and never fully gets into the emotions. I tell you I would love to see another chapter to this, or just another Ash/May fic from you at all. This is truly the most well written and grasping story with this pairing I have yet to read. Fantastic job.

Hope there is more!

WOW that was awesome!!

I personally dont like the Ash/misty pairring... i always liked that May/Ash pairrings the most xD

i love the story! keep up the good work! (this deserves top rating! :) )

This story was beautifully written. I think I'd enjoy reading your other stories. Keep up the good work.

Very well written story, and I hope you continue writing. If you want to write rare topics for this section then I suggest Brock/Jesse, Ash/Jesse, any no Jesse/James using Jesse or any Ms.Ketchum. Well, anyways good story.

I think I can safely say I passed the challenge now. More than three reviews and four hundred views in two days. I only have about six or seven views to go now but I only have about thirty minutes left if I recall correctly. It\'s all good though. I liked writing the story and thanks for the challenge Verseman, I\'ll try another if I get the chance.

Awsome story; your writing is as excellent as ever. I think I do preffer your work with Evangilion more though, especially your ACC storys.

Not bad. I think it is about even. Good attempt.

Awww~ I love the end. It was cute. XD Good story. ^^