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by Despina

person chocho
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It seems to me as if Shuichi is just looking for an excuse so he doesn't have to choose between Eiri and Kyosuke. Not that i blame him, but still... It doesn't seem fair to either of the two guys. Gotta say, Shu has some serious problems. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter!
person Amethyst-eyed Koneko
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* Poor Eiri. The guy just seems to keep getting himself in one stupid situation after another. I'm really rooting for Eiri and Shuichi to pull this off and get back together but fate (aka Kyosuke) just seems to keep getting in the way. *sigh* What to do? I hope they make it!! :D I love how well you have written this! Your characters are very believeable and realistic. I genuinely distrust Kyosuke. I know people like him and I can't stand 'em! I especially like your portrayal of Shuichi. Finally! A story that has a grownup mature Shuichi!! No longer is he the whiney bratty idiot!! Yippee! He is at last a strong independent adult who can take care of himself and doesn't see the world thru rose colored glasses. And Eiri! Ah, Eiri is at last human. He seems to have grown feelings and emotions and the ability to express them while apart from Shu. Yay! Eighteen months can apparently work miracles! Shuichi grew up and Eiri grew a heart. Nice!! :D I am rather saddened to see how bad off Ryuichi is. I adore Ryuichi and it hurts to see him reduced to being a babbling psycho who needs a keeper and lots of meds. *sigh* I love him anyway! *^_^* The Hiro x Ryuichi relationship can't last - there's just too much stress on it. Ryu's extreme personalities + Ryu's need for medication and a keeper + the fact that these two only hooked up after they both failed with Shuichi = a short lived relationship. There just seems to be more against them than for them. How much patience/tolerance can Hiro have for Ryuichi realistically? Anyhoo, that's just my two cents! :D (sorry!)
Update ASAP!!
Koneko
P.S. I can not tell you how utterly stunned I was when I read that Eiri let Shuichi take him! I NEVER thought that would happen!! It's little shockers like this that have me coming back for more!! Love it!! :D
person JouKaibaMokie
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have watched too many movies to know that he is probably gonna start in square one, when I reached the middle of the fic I already knew what was gonna happen to Eiri, but in other chapters it always goes with a little twists here and there, but in this chappy there was none, I was kinda surprised, but that's okay...and I had to check if you updated and I didn't know till today, when I checked, anyways I read the two chapters I didn't read and I loved them, update really soon^_^
person ladyfiend
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! don\'t leave it there!!!!!! please please please please update soon! i\'m FREAKING OUT over here...*panting*


wonderful chapter, btw...but the hyperventalating is leaving me light headed...update soon!
person Ryu Sakuma
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh MY GOD!!! I\'m so sitting on the edge of my seat here! You absolutely must update as soon as possible. Me and Kuma-chan can\'t wait to see what happens next, right Kuma-chan? *pink bunny nods head* so update soon, na no da!!
person Gingitsune
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kyosuke is hot!!! It seems to be that he really loves Shuichi and is not playing around with Shuichi. If he truly loves Shuichi, I can see the depth of his love for he is willing to have half of Shuichi or none at all. Then again some people might say that it is because he doesn\'t love Shuichi that much, that\'s why he can share him. Anyway, another excellent chapter. Love to read this story!!
person Susana
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Thanks to you I went to sleep veery late, BUT WITH AN EXCELENT excuse.
I loved the fanfic, very different from the cliche ones.. I hope you upload the next chapter soon.
person Yuki\'s twin
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Growls* I want more now..*demanding sound of voice and laughs* Thank-you for posting this going going to be good...will wait for more since I have too.....
person luciology
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the way this fic shows that there are still emotional stumbling blocks along the way in Eiri and Shuichi\'s reformed relationship. It would be unrealistic for them to go off happily into the setting sun. I do hope that ultimately Shuichi can learn to trust Eiri and want to be with him on a long term basis.
person JouKaibaMokie
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh men, ssSHUCKS! yuki didn\'t kiss her Tat shouldn\'t have come so Yuki could get into more trouble...hahaha yuki is in trouble haha update soon, and he isback to square one!

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