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for Shadows of the mind

by Queerbee

person the later chapters are lacking update now and suck less
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
read the name its hard 2 do this on a psp
person shinra
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
kick ass that was a great chapter you need to keep going hope you update soon. hurry up and update the next chapter.
person Scorpinac
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, just to say it, it's either Rini or Chibi-Usa, not both. Please make up your mind and use either her "English" name or her iriginal Japanese one. Thank you. Otherwise, nice one! Mina gone evil, wouldn't have seen that one coming. Can't wait for the next chapter! Laters!
person Scorpinac
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Actually, this is more like "A Nightmare On Elm Street" than "Friday The 13th". But be that as it may, I'm guessing Rini is this tale is about 10 or less. No matter, as you say, now it's getting interesting. Now "They" are goin after Ames! Okay, next chapter!!
person Scorpinac
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I understand completely. I wasn't exactly active for round about a week when I had my appendix out(in the neighborhood of ten years ago...), so I know how it goes. Just take your time and update when you actually can! Laters!
person Aninzu
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Take your time. I know how that goes with surgeries. Just get it up when you can. I'm really interested in seeing what will happen.
person Blackrosephantom
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O Whoa...
Yes, things are getting interesting. Please fix your grammar errors. Ex~ Hotaru is in the library with herself? Amy put on a rob? Etc. Thats ok. We all make mistakes. What counts is that you have amazing writing talent.
person Cheesypuff
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what that was it I want more damn it and you better not take 2 fucking weeks to update again I like this story please continue.
person blackdestiny
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hell ya this was a great chapter you have to update soon so that I can read it so don't take to long. great story kept going.
person Anon
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Incredible work I am truly impressed. A damn good story line that dosnt rely on childish smut. keep it up

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