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It was so good! Please continue it!

UPDATE. CHAPTER 3. NOW. LOOK! I'M REVIEWING! SO WRITE MOREEEEEE

Ok, well first of all this is a good start to the story. I have really enjoyed the chapters that you've written so far, and i do hope you write more, as i absoultely love Tsume's character.

Second, please don't have the attitude you have now towards writing. You should write the story for you, not for the reviews. Don't get me wrong, i like reviews, especially if they give positive or constructive criticism. It's a great feeling to know someone out there appreciates your work. And i do hope you gain the courage to write more, you'd be surprised at how many other authors don't know what they're doing and then demand reviews or else they won't continue. Just keep writing for yourself most of all, and take in all the good vibes from any review, even if they are not flowing in at a hundred reviews a minute. :)

Thanks for writing and i hope you continue.

Wolfsoul

PLEASE DO ANOTHER CHAPTER IT IS REALLY GOOD PLEASE

It is really good please put up the next chapter

keep it up. its going good. update soon.

Hey! you got your reviews!! Update soon!! please...

Please oh please continue! This has to be one of the best fanfics I've read in a while! I'm looking forward to it's continuation

Hello there.
I was reading your story and i am very intrested in reading more. A bit of advice, when your writing, avoid repeating the same word twice in the same two sentances. And dont rush it, because you manage to forget a lot of connecting words such as 'of, and, if, but'

I'll be waiting for your next chapter.

Sincerely
Lady Sin

woo - love where this is going so far. So this first time is a mistake... but we haven't even gotten to that yet! Please continue!