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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More please write more on this please loved it.
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omgsh!! That was awesome!!!!!!!!!..I love hoow Shuichi was saying he was his..can you liek create a sequel!!..like a 3-soem or a 4-some!!..OMGSH! THAT WAS TOTALY HOTT!
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love yaoi and I like your writing, but it's starting to get boring and it's starting to read the same. Can you write something that isn't M/M for once?
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey can you in some way continue this fic??? please !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Besides from the spelling and grammar mistakes the fic is indeed very good.
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was one of the sexiest and hottest stories i have ever read.
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...very hot! That was excellent!
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hrm... neat idea, but you could have done a lot more with Tats and Tohma I think... You do need a beta reader.. your writing is good but you keep messing up on a few word choices - is English not your native language?