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I seriously think Kiba should have a go first, since he's the alpha male. Then Tsume... then Hige... and lastly Toboe. Or whatever you choose. This fic is coming out great. Honestly.

OMG! UPDATE SOOOON!!!!!!!!!!

Oye, I think Toboe should go first. Either him or Kiba/Hige.

Tsume then Tsume then Tsume and at the end TSUME!!! (and only Tsume :P:P:P) ;)

I say go with Toboe either first or second. With plenty of BSDM on Blue's part and maybe some furs

You updated, great! Keep up the good work ^_^

A splendid chapter, one I really enjoyed. Like I said before this has the potential to become a great fic and from the look of things it will be. You’ve done a brilliant job of capturing many of the characters personalities (Kiba is a little oc in my opinion but then it’s really hard to write about him) especially with Blue, you have added a hint more of realism to the character by having her normally calm and polite personality altered as a result of her heat. Genius, pure and simple. This chapter has proven to be just as good as the last, possibly even better as a result of Blue’s cruel yet arousing teasing. I really don’t know who should be the one to take her virginity but if push comes to shove the pack can always come at her all at once.

~Canis Star~

Other than a few typo's and misused words and phrases, this was a great chapter. :)

Hige first, Hige first.

Alright, I’ve been waiting for you to update forever. I have to tell you I love this chapter even more than I did the last one, Blue had the pack completely at her mercy until she decided to let Tsume tie her hands back. I love the way she was toying with them and I can’t wait to see who is going to mount her first and if she will be able to untie herself. Personally I agree with ^______^ about having either Kiba or Hige go first as Kiba is the Alpha male and it is his right to claim Blue and Hige is so happenly the closest thing she has to a mate. As much as I want Toboe to mate with her I think that he should either go after Kiba and Hige or just plain last that way Blue’s hands won’t be bound and she can seduce him on her own like she was going to or so the others can coach him. Anyway I hope you update soon because I can’t wait to read the next chapter.