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lol i luv it lol

You know what this story needs? Better attention to grammar. It's wrtten out well enough so you know exactly what's going on, but did you even check this after you were done writing it? I has some major grammatical mistakes. I'm sure you didn't mean for it to be something really in depth and detailed, but it makes it easier for people to read if you take the time to spell things right and for the record it's Meryl. Not Marely, Marley, or Mearly. MERYL. Ok. I hope you'll take my advice and check your grammar mistakes next time. I like the whole graphic nature of it, but just spend some more time with it and get it right before you post it.

OMG!!! WTF!!! LMFAO!!!! THIS IS LIKE ONE OF THE MOST FUNNIEST FICS EVER (ONE OF THE MOST)-_______-!!!! U SHOULD WRITE MORE!!!!! GO YAOI LOL!!!!!! OK I\'M TRIPPIN\' BYE!!!

P.S: WRITE MORE!!!

You are possibly the most obvious troll I have seen in a long time. Moron.