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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, this was an amazing fic!! I loved how you got Light\'s personality down to a T, and how he percieved L and all his... L-ness, lol. At first I was kind of upset at how L was taking the bait and doing what Light wanted, but then you totally came back and had L flip the situation completely around! That was ingenius!! Ah, great work; you are definitely one of THE best DN fanfic writers ever!! ^_^
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You win the internet for this. Especially the first line. I cackled like a maniac all the way through. xD
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was great! i\'m just reading the manga so i don\'t know the whole story yet, but you certainly did a great job with the obsession with details, control, and victory that seems to be a main theme between the two. i love how it\'s hard to tell throughout who exactly is being used and who is doing the using... just like in the manga. also, the end made me laugh... i want to feel bad for Light, and yet i can\'t help giving L credit XD i hope you write more Death Note fics! this one rocked ^^
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was great! This is the first DN fic I\'ve read in which L isn\'t portrayed as some pathetic uke. I loved it! Well written and a great twist at the end. Horray for you! Thanks much for sharing.
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love you. Oh god, that was some great, great writing. You had them totally in character. I love you. I love this story you wrote. You are completely awesome. Please write more death note fics, please. I beg you.