rate_review Reviews

BRILLIANT. I think Akabane~sama was OOC from what's shown in the canon, but I think you didn't make him into a new character- rather, you showed us a different, but believable, side of him. I mean, even Akabane~sama's gonna have a weakness, ne?

I think the plot was a little slow near the start (that whole following Akabane~sama around the city bit) but other than that, I LOVED it! Especially the ending~ so KAWAII~! ^^

Woooow... normally I don't read such long fics on AFF, since I come here for PWPs (XD) but this one caught my eye with the great intro and the pairing. Well done! The characters were so well handled, though I think you watched the anime rather than read the manga. (Psst, Paul's actually a super strong fighter. ^^;;; But that doesn't appear until very late in the manga series. I've only read the manga.) Anyway! It was absolutely wonderful, and as an Akabane fangirl I must applaud this point of view on his reactions. They were marvelously IC and thoughtful all the way through. <3

another chappy??? one in which they get together in the end??? i feel so sorry for akabane... i mean i feel sorry for Ginji for being raped, but i also feel so sorry for akabane... he never wanted to do it... he just wanted to have Ginji love him... or like him... *sniffle*

omg. this was so GOOD. i really enjoyed...seriously. it was perhaps one of the BEST one-shots i\'ve ever read...and i don\'t know if i\'d even call it a PWP because there was definite plotage...damn that could have been a whole STORY...you should add another chapter and continue it...unless of course, that was your whole plan from the get go...i didn\'t really pay attention to see if it was a one-shot, just the first chapter of an actual story, or even just your average PWP...i was WAY too wrapped up in what was going on. Excellent piece of work here...sad, dramatic, tensing...wonderful.

hope to see more from you soon!

This was incredibaly(sp?) long. I\'ve never read anything like this before, well, especially about Ginji and Akabane. I liked it though, Well, keep up the good work, Bye Bye! ^_^

:P Akajin is always awesome to read. Thanks for posting this, first off! :D Us starving fans need something to read, right? Your RPing skills are great! XD

>> I had a couple dislikes with it. Minor gramatical and punctuation errors. [There were some parts of the fic/RP where you should\'ve capitalized.] XD BTW, I don\'t think ANYONE can stutter that much--Ginji went stutte crazy near the end of the fic!

On another note, psychologically I felt like this fic left me empty. :/ It was very OOC--specially for a certain doctor. :P I know it\'s just an RP and I\'m sure you\'ve caught on but it is my firm belief that Akabane would not rape Ginji. XD The man WANTS the challenge to be there--if he rapes Ginji he\'s admiting to himself that he didn\'t win Ginji over. That he ended up having to use force on the poor guy! :P Those are just my feelings though. <3

Other than that it was a fun read. :D Don\'t let my critiscms stop you from writing/RPing out what you love! XD! Including the Akajin rape scenes! *evil laughter* >:D [Hey, I\'ll read \'em anyway! :D]