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OMG!!!!!!!!!!! This is really good I was a little hesitant to read since it's a Kyo/Akito but it's very good. You have a very good writing style and there was no major spelling mistakes that I could see. Please update soon.

Love the story. Keep up the good work. I'm dieing to read the rest.

I like this! It is cool! Akito's in love w/ Kyo!! I love stories like this! Unfortunately, their aren't enough!!! Please continue writing this!!!

this story is starting to get really good. Sorry, I should be reviewing for you, but I've been busy in the Inuyasha section. But I've enjoyed your other stories as well. Please continue, if only for me.

I love this story. I haven't seen a lot of AkitoxKyo pairings, and you have managed to pull it off very well. It's nice to see Akito for once as not being portrayed as a one-sided sadist, the way he seems to be in most stories. I think you've really given him some depth to his character.

Out of curiousity, I noticed that you also have this story published on Fanfiction.net, and that it actually has a fifth chapter there. Do you plan on uploading that chapter here as well? I'd love to be able to read it here as well, as I don't go on FF.Net very often.

I love it!!!!! Akito\'s so awesome! *high pitch fangirl squeal* HI-5!!!!! *virtually hi-5\'s you*

Huzzah! You must write moooooooooooore!!!!!!!!!! <3

I really like this idea. There aren't that many stories out there that view Akito in even a semi-not psychotic light. And him wanting Kyo, that's a really good idea.

NO!!! I like this story. I hope this makes you feel better, because i am very transfixed and eager to read more. do write more, and to give you some comfort, there is someone out there that will be taking in every worthy moment of reading your story. just want to make you feel better

nay

honestly i have never read a better kyo/akito pic. i dunno, i'm just really stubborn and want to believe that akito is male, but i'm sure, so i'll stop yelling at my computer and apologize for irrational behavior. I only read up to the 12th volume of the mangas, and i'm all american, *actually half german half american, so call me a german american* but so i'll just get over my little bitch fit. i just want to say that i like this story very much. for the first time there is no depressing or heartrbreaking scenes at the moment. I read some other stories and i felt like putting a gun to my head and pulling the trigger *i'm that kind of person that gets easily influenced by other's emotions* but for once there a bit of happiness, it's not like joyous elation, but it makes a small smile quirk at the corners of my mouth. I used to hate akito with all my might, but then i watched the series and i began to show some compassion for him. now I adore him. first he's completely beautiful, and secondly i just like his hostility, because that reminds me of myself when i'm P.M.S.ing! *i do throw things, you can ask my sister* hear i go rambling and you must be thinking, who the hell is this annoying twat? okay, i love your story, and i would cry if you never finished it. your story has changed my day, before i was a depressed blob, and now i feel relaxed and collected. thank you.

nay (it pisses me off that they have the email addresses hidden, so just for the hell of it flyinggoldfish_8@hotmail.com)

Your story is turning out really well. I like Akito's character, and I'm glad that at least one person doesn't see him as a purely sadistic bastard. I can't wait for you to update