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I wonder where's the continuation?!? I hope this story was not abandoned or discontinued. It was really really good. The plot was nice and the flow was good too. I hope to see more chapters of it.

Ja.

I am really enjoying your story. The character development is especially well handled. Cant wait to see more.

Regards,
Mark

I rather like this story so far. ^_^ They all seem pretty-much in character, though another aspect to Shinji & Asuka that EoE espeically points out is how both are too selfish to see the other's wants/needs.

Off to chapter 3!
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You mentioning the Evas made me want to mention this, but just a reminder: Eva 1: Yui Eva 2: Kyoko Eva 3: Rei I.
Hmm...I don't like the idea of Shinji smoking, but oh well (and according to episode 20, Misato only smokes after sex. ^_^; ). Onto the next chapter, and btw, I like the fact this is Shinji/Asuka, they're my favorite couple in this show. ^__^
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This is a great story I just hope you decide one day to update this great story so please update soon

Wonder why you won't publish this storry at fanfiction or mediaminer.
It's pretty good.

I manage to read your story and i'm really am impress with your work. If there was another series about Evangelion then I could picture something like this happening, such as "The Return of Evangelion", etc, although there wouldn't be as much mature content. I also like how you brought up the characters to a coming of age in this future story, because I usually believe in the assumption that growing up, you are usually not going to be the same person as in the past, such as what you did to Shinji, Asuka, Rei, etc. I wasn't really a big fan of Shinji being a shy character, so i accept how you made his character more mature and confident then he was before. I don't think you need to have him smoking to identify his maturity though, but you are the author creating the story. I also like how Asuka has change as well, even though her personality hasn't change that much. She is certainly less brash and seems to care for Shinji more than before. I also like how Rei Ayanami is being more open then before because it shows her her character more hopeful than depressing. Kensuke becoming a pilot is a cool idea because he becomes more identified for his character. Wouldn't mind seeing Toji making a comeback and getting another chance piloting a EVA. I also like the name "Soul" instead of "Nerv" and the fact of stronger angels attacking. Also like the role of Misato being a commander of Soul also. I know this is a lengthy review, but overall keep up the good work and I look forward towards the next chapter.

Please continue, im very interested in what will happen next.

Great fic. Too many people flame works like this. You need to be great for this to work out. And what do you know, this does. After three years of wandering you can't call shinji out of charactor becuase we have no clue waht happened. Hell i tried tpo kill myself 8 times and now people wander why my personality changed. Give the "new-breed Angels" a seperate name so we don't get them confused. Final critoric statement, continue quickly. We want to see more now. Need to see 01 go berserk stage 4.

this is a good plot line. Though the new angels are a little to powerful. If asuka, a fully trailed eva pilot can\'t stop them, shinji a partly trailed pilot won\'t stand a chance even with the power of unit one. Just something to think about.

later and keep up the good work.