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for The Parable of Id

by Starlit

person Megan Consoer
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person shuiede
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn! that was so good to read. I have been engaged recently on watching all the 26 episodes of Witch Hunter Robin and got so entranced with it. I hate seeing Amon and Robin's relationship go like that in the end - being his ward and stuff. It did frustrate me more!!! damn! I say, they will be much better portrayed as being the 'Adam' and 'Eve' for the coming dawn of Witch era (wishful thinking). Hope you got the idea for your next fic. ehehe.assuming.....there will be more. I do hope so.

As for your writing, damn, I am glad to have had first check on this fic. It is very well-written and the details of sex are quite astounding. Amon is a great lover. He portrayed very well in initiating the sex pleasuring acts first while Robin, as expected, played the virgin no-know-it-all. It was so good.

Hell. I am also recently checking this side of the category because I find a may-december love affair cute and challenging. Just like my Aoshi and Misao from Ruruni Kenshin. Amon and Robin remind me of my favorite anime couple. Well....Amon has similar qualities - both physical and emotional - with Aoshi Shinomori. From good looks to brooding personality....hell...even wearing trenchcoats. As for Robin and Misao, they are exact opposites but both are uberly gorgeoous if given a chance.

i hope you do write more. Good fic.
person JdWheels
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWSOME!! AWESOME!! AWESOME.

I tip my hat to you on this one. Keep it up (PUN INTENDED)
person theGrinDevil
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHR is one of mt favorite anime.

You really did a great job on this one. It was splendid!
person Katie
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A friend of mine told me about this story and I totally dig it. She was right--it\'s pretty fucking awesome.

The time you take to describe everything makes me squirm. XD I think I need a cigarette. :)
person Megan Consoer
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person Mariam
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amon had been pleased, giving her a nod before sitting down to breakfast.

Let the games begin.


I loved that. And I laughed out loud when Amon starts to panic! Awesome stuff! ^_^
person Jokey
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I dunno why more people haven\'t read/reviewed this. It\'s awesome.

And Robin can be so innocent sometimes. Like when says, \"I like this. We should do this everyday.\" That made me crack up.

And all the internal stuff with Amon was dead on. Awesome awesome.
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You did an awesome job here. I\'ve just started in watching this series. I\'m halfway through and I love it. And you did a pretty kickass job of protraying these two. Yay! :D
person Claire Jones
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You changed the title. Now that was GREAT! So hot. Seriously, I loved the way you continued the story and the ending was so adorable. You don\'t have any problems writing erotic scenes.

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