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Hey Naomi!! Awesome story. Shuichi is kinda OOC, but your right, what if he did take it out that way!? That would be sexy. Maybe we could write to the creators ask for the movie thingy? That would rock!!!

Woot! I feel so cool .. such a sexy story partially dedicated to me. XD Hahahah I loved it though. :3 It\'s a bit more violent than what I usually read, which makes it more fascinating to me. XD Gahh .. I don\'t do long comments. ^^;

\"Fuck\" count.


HOLY FUCK. You and I both know how fucking sexy that is. You are fucking sexy for writing this fuckity-fucked story. Touma <---(American, fucker.) Hahaha, ah. Fuck. Anyways, Shuichi is crazy-fuck in this one !!! it\'s hot. I won\'t deny it, this rape scene is pretty fucking amazing. I might just hug you later. I mean wayyy fucking later, after I\'m done with my project later. Fuckity. fuck. fuck. I forgot to do that shit, too. Odzy <---Fucking Loser right there.



I love you girly. HURRY THE FUCK UP ON THIS STORY.

::Did read author notes, but is going to say things anyway::

I do believe the #1 thing people will complain about - honestly - would be the fact that Shuichi wouldn\'t do something like this, not innocent neglegent Shuichi. :) Tohma might to Shuichi, just not seen the other way around. Another, you might get hit by a person complaining about Japanese usage, think i saw one phrase that no one is going to know what the hell is being said. -___- I use fan-girl japanese all the time, and get complained about it. So, yah.

Assuming that this means i need to get off my lazy ass and type out my PWP, ne?

Besides all the above, very productive story. Many quirks, good use of Tohma-uke smut. Always adored by the fans. I suppose threatening him is the only way you can get your way with him...ne?

Araki

Oh wow, I never thought that Shuichi would be so... yeah. Well it is dark, but also sexy. You did a great job commbining the two. I can\'t wait to read more!! I\'m Loving it so far!!

::screams:: Agh!! Poor Tohma! How can Shuichi DO that to Tohma?! He cut his...his STOMACH...~::faints::

Update!!