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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Pretty good, but I personally think it was way too rushed- there was a lot of potential in it.
As for the pairings that have no 'evidence' what so ever, who cares? I have 'liked' many people, but believe me, you wouldn't know I liked you unless I actually told you, it's just the way I am. Not all people will be straight forward. So even if we're talking about imaginary cartoon characters, it applies for them too. What, I HAVE to show signs that I like you? NO. So chill out on that."
I would be able to tell, WhiteRaven always knows.
"First I'd like to blink.
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What. The. Fuck. Was. That." I believe it was a lemon fic.
"Lan and Maylu are 16-Reaction:ok.
Lan is a vampire-Reaction:Whatev-WAIT WHAT??? oh okay, fine." ... are you prejudiced against vampires?
"Lan: I think I just vamped out. Maylu's reaction is unrealistic. In fact the dialogue was pure bulshit.* bulshit? eh?! I looked over the first draft and tried to suss out any bulshitesque qualities, but failed miserably, frankly, I have no Idea what you are talking about
"It would have been better as: Lann fuuked maylu with a 6-foot long dildo ad then se bled to deth and dyd!!!!!"
You have weird taste in stories.
As for the pairings that have no 'evidence' what so ever, who cares? I have 'liked' many people, but believe me, you wouldn't know I liked you unless I actually told you, it's just the way I am. Not all people will be straight forward. So even if we're talking about imaginary cartoon characters, it applies for them too. What, I HAVE to show signs that I like you? NO. So chill out on that."
I would be able to tell, WhiteRaven always knows.
"First I'd like to blink.
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What. The. Fuck. Was. That." I believe it was a lemon fic.
"Lan and Maylu are 16-Reaction:ok.
Lan is a vampire-Reaction:Whatev-WAIT WHAT??? oh okay, fine." ... are you prejudiced against vampires?
"Lan: I think I just vamped out. Maylu's reaction is unrealistic. In fact the dialogue was pure bulshit.* bulshit? eh?! I looked over the first draft and tried to suss out any bulshitesque qualities, but failed miserably, frankly, I have no Idea what you are talking about
"It would have been better as: Lann fuuked maylu with a 6-foot long dildo ad then se bled to deth and dyd!!!!!"
You have weird taste in stories.
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! that is an amazing work of spam Mr. janvfz.rtpsnxm,nvkj
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First I'd like to blink.
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What. The. Fuck. Was. That.
Lan and Maylu are 16-Reaction:ok.
Lan is a vampire-Reaction:Whatev-WAIT WHAT??? oh okay, fine.
Lan: I think I just vamped out. Maylu's reaction is unrealistic. In fact the dialogue was pure bulshit.
It would have been better as: Lann fuuked maylu with a 6-foot long dildo ad then se bled to deth and dyd!!!!!
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What. The. Fuck. Was. That.
Lan and Maylu are 16-Reaction:ok.
Lan is a vampire-Reaction:Whatev-WAIT WHAT??? oh okay, fine.
Lan: I think I just vamped out. Maylu's reaction is unrealistic. In fact the dialogue was pure bulshit.
It would have been better as: Lann fuuked maylu with a 6-foot long dildo ad then se bled to deth and dyd!!!!!
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good, but I personally think it was way too rushed- there was a lot of potential in it.
As for the pairings that have no 'evidence' what so ever, who cares? I have 'liked' many people, but believe me, you wouldn't know I liked you unless I actually told you, it's just the way I am. Not all people will be straight forward. So even if we're talking about imaginary cartoon characters, it applies for them too. What, I HAVE to show signs that I like you? NO. So chill out on that.
As for the pairings that have no 'evidence' what so ever, who cares? I have 'liked' many people, but believe me, you wouldn't know I liked you unless I actually told you, it's just the way I am. Not all people will be straight forward. So even if we're talking about imaginary cartoon characters, it applies for them too. What, I HAVE to show signs that I like you? NO. So chill out on that.
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"This could be one of the, if not THE MOST, retarded fanfics EVER to be written."
The fic is just fine, you are simply illiterate.
"Serously. What the fuck? o.o Look! I can make netto be a vampire anytime! even though there's no evidence.
I smell hypocrasy(sp, I know. XD)"
I smell both apples and oranges, they can't be compared because they aren't the same, in mythology you can become a Vampire, in occultism you can awaken to being one, you can't become gay.
"As for the yaoi...
"Chaud: a friend of Lan's, but they hate each other."
Completely untrue. If you've ever watched the later anime, you'd know that they actually begin to warm up to each other."
... Uh, I have watched the later anime, and they are still arch rivals, even if they do become closer, they still have a lasting edge toward each other, it's not the same as a so-called love hate relationship, they truly do care for each other, and at the same time hate each other.
"Laika: Why would you Screw someone who beat you up the first time you met them?"
"Ditto for Laika."
Laika doesn't warm up, plain and simple, he thinks emotions are a weakness, but when used correctly they are a great and deadly force.
"Please know what you're talking about before you try and bash yaoi."
bash yaoi? excuse me? I'm bashing pairings with no supporting facts, plain and simple, there is nothing in the games, anime, or manga to support Lan or Chaud being gay or to support that they are in love. I am okay with yaoi, but when people do idiotic things with it, it annoys me, no one ever sets anything up, the average yaoi fic goes like this:
Guy1: hi, I'm Gay, will you screw me in the ass?
Guy2: okay.
*they screw*
not every gay man likes anal sex.
not every gay man walks up to random people and says that.
I will admit that my fic was a bit off the wall in places, I sat down, I typed, that was the result, it's that simple.
I would appreciate if you didn't flame me.
The fic is just fine, you are simply illiterate.
"Serously. What the fuck? o.o Look! I can make netto be a vampire anytime! even though there's no evidence.
I smell hypocrasy(sp, I know. XD)"
I smell both apples and oranges, they can't be compared because they aren't the same, in mythology you can become a Vampire, in occultism you can awaken to being one, you can't become gay.
"As for the yaoi...
"Chaud: a friend of Lan's, but they hate each other."
Completely untrue. If you've ever watched the later anime, you'd know that they actually begin to warm up to each other."
... Uh, I have watched the later anime, and they are still arch rivals, even if they do become closer, they still have a lasting edge toward each other, it's not the same as a so-called love hate relationship, they truly do care for each other, and at the same time hate each other.
"Laika: Why would you Screw someone who beat you up the first time you met them?"
"Ditto for Laika."
Laika doesn't warm up, plain and simple, he thinks emotions are a weakness, but when used correctly they are a great and deadly force.
"Please know what you're talking about before you try and bash yaoi."
bash yaoi? excuse me? I'm bashing pairings with no supporting facts, plain and simple, there is nothing in the games, anime, or manga to support Lan or Chaud being gay or to support that they are in love. I am okay with yaoi, but when people do idiotic things with it, it annoys me, no one ever sets anything up, the average yaoi fic goes like this:
Guy1: hi, I'm Gay, will you screw me in the ass?
Guy2: okay.
*they screw*
not every gay man likes anal sex.
not every gay man walks up to random people and says that.
I will admit that my fic was a bit off the wall in places, I sat down, I typed, that was the result, it's that simple.
I would appreciate if you didn't flame me.
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
uhh... wow. Just... just... wow. I mean... I agree that there should be some straight fiction, but...
I dunno... just... take some more time to write it. I didn't even get past the 3rd line of dialogue. Who talks like that?
I dunno... just... take some more time to write it. I didn't even get past the 3rd line of dialogue. Who talks like that?
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This could be one of the, if not THE MOST, retarded fanfics EVER to be written. Serously. What the fuck? o.o Look! I can make netto be a vampire anytime! even though there's no evidence.
I smell hypocrasy(sp, I know. XD)
As for the yaoi...
"Chaud: a friend of Lan's, but they hate each other."
Completely untrue. If you've ever watched the later anime, you'd know that they actually begin to warm up to each other.
"Laika: Why would you Screw someone who beat you up the first time you met them?"
Ditto for Laika.
Please know what you're talking about before you try and bash yaoi.
I smell hypocrasy(sp, I know. XD)
As for the yaoi...
"Chaud: a friend of Lan's, but they hate each other."
Completely untrue. If you've ever watched the later anime, you'd know that they actually begin to warm up to each other.
"Laika: Why would you Screw someone who beat you up the first time you met them?"
Ditto for Laika.
Please know what you're talking about before you try and bash yaoi.
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December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'VE BEEN HOPING SOMEONE WOULD WRITE A GOOD LAN/MAYL FIC FOR AGES!!!!!!
I'VE BEEN HOPING SOMEONE WOULD WRITE A GOOD LAN/MAYL FIC FOR AGES!!!!!!
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"the way girls were now, it was hard to believe anyone was still a virgin.\"
very true, sluttiness is quickly becoming the norm, even in intelligent countries such as Japan which are not stupid like america is.
very true, sluttiness is quickly becoming the norm, even in intelligent countries such as Japan which are not stupid like america is.