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May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I adore how your oc! You're character creation is brilliant. I loved the fic as a whole. Very cute ^.^
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December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol. I like tha characters you put in here and if you are writing a story with them I think it will be good.
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Laughing: I loved this. His wife is so adorable and Fei & Kuro-chan are just too hot for words.
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice oneshot. The smut was veeery nice, and I think the emotions behind it were well-written. I can so see Kuro forcing an answer out of Fai like that. ^__^ One complaint, I really don't think all the original character backgrounds were needed at all. Maybe in a longer fic, but seeing this is a Fai/Kuro PWP, I don't think the readers are going to care much about anything else. ^__^; The dialogue at the end was very cute, though.