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oks. Well i can asuume that Kyo and Tohru are together... and Yuki isn\'t happy about it obviously. So then the question would be why Kyo and what the hell is he so angery about. Obviusly we don\'t know. Hmm very interesting i must say. But i am also asuming based on the Anime...if it is based on the Manga you\'ll definitly have to explain why it is that Akito and Kyo\'s birth father haven\'t managed to put him in his cell yet, cuss yeah, you say they arn\'t in highschool any more which means Kyo\'s graduatied and they did say they were going to take him right after Graduation. But hey maybe you are basing it an the manga and he some how manged to get more time that would be kewl. But then the problem arises that Kyo isn\'t alowed love nor is he alowed to married, absolutly forbiden for the cat, probly has something to do with why they want to lock him up...i duknow but maybe that\'s why he\'s all upset...i duknow i duknow! I want to though you need to definitly keep this up, and tell us how it is Kyo and Tohru got together and how he got around the whole not being able to have love thing. Man hhis birth father would throw a shit fit. Poor Kyo...Ohh maybe I know I know!!! He\'s probably all upset because of what ever the hell happend between him and Tohru\'s mother. I mean Kyoko and Kyo were really close and all...maybe he\'s all pissy because he feels like responsible for Tohru\'s mother\'s death...but no...again not if this is only based on the anime...man you drving me crazy!!! I wants to know were you\'re going with this! But ok i wanted to coment that your writing is very pretty and lots of discription. I really love th erose pettle eyes line, that was pretty and lots of other ones too. But the only coment is you use so much of it that sometimes i lose the story and i can\'t figuer out what you\'re trying to say happnes. But deffintly don\'t tone it down all the way. You\'re writting is sooo pretty so yeah! Love the story!!! Please please please keep the sotry going! I really really reall want to know what happend next!!! I love it!.

I luffed it, koi bito. ^_^ Everyone was in character and you made me like Tohru. O.o;; Anyways, I can\'t wait for the other chapter. Hugs and kisses.
~Rei.

This was really interesting, you could feel the tension in the air. I really want to know what\'s Kyos problem and why is he ignoring Thoru. Please continue this and update soon.