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Hurray! I found the rest! Yes, you should definetely continue, what the hell kinda question is that? Everyone else feels the same as you, none of us understood what the hell happened with the whole Minako thing, and judging by Takaya\'s personality, it\'s pretty easy to believe he\'s the kinda guy who\'d just go with the flow and pretend he knew what happened just because he got the feeling it was something bad- don\'t overanalyze it, this isn\'t an AU, it\'s just a tad bit different, and Au would have them fighting vampires or something lame like that, lol. I was hesitant to read your story when I saw the words AU in the description on FF.Net, but I\'m SO glad I stopped to give it a read, and then I found it here, and PLEEEEEEEEEASE continue, I love your style, how you keep the characters so in-character, it\'s like MOB continued, seriously! Please write another chapter!!!!

One of the best fic\ that i've ever read .Hope you'll write the next\ chapter very soon. I'm a new fan of mirage but after reading your fic\ i think i'm hook.\\\so hope to read your new chapter soon.\ Yaoi Rocks!!!!!!

Your story was great. As for Naoe's hair color...maybe ash brown?

BOWS DOWN TO YOU.OH MY GOD IT GAVE ME CHILLS.KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

Good Lord! You can't afford to not continue!!...or rather, I can't afford for you to not continue!! Okay, responses. 1) Call it mild AU. He only learned something of it originally and I doubt the intesity of the situation had fully sunk in by the end of things in the movie. 2) Chestnut....warm, but with a mildly dusty feel. 3) Takaya: brown with fleck of gold, thus they can look gold, perhaps hazel. Naoe: fucked if I know, but they're dark. Keep running with violet, it's a sexy color. 4) Again, AU. And trust me, people will forgive mild discrepancies with the original storyline; first of all, it's your story and should be portrayed however the hell you want it to be, and secondly, this has to be one of the single most beautiful pieces of fiction I have ever had the fortune to read.

I had chills......I can't really describe it beyond that; it was something like sensory overload. Naoe's intensity was something to behold, as was Takaya's surrender. Conquering in its command of emotion, a deep and all-consuming need for one another depicted by actions holding both an unrelenting love and profound satisfaction brought on by years of trial and devotion.

I am such a sap.....and am also absurdly thrilled that you may continue it yet. It truly is so beautiful to behold, and I cannot wait for Naoe to claim Takaya, the notion has me giddy and rather incoherent.

Wanting to be supportive and feeling rather warm toward life,
~Nacht

Wow... that was hot. I haven’t read MoB like this for a while. Yes, more sex and more angst. They alway the best. You don't get these kind thing from these two couple that often in series or ova. Only the novel (that what I hear. Haven't read the novel)

To answer you question:
1. About the mirror incident. The one that is spoke is Kagetora. He got some of his memories back. I don’t think Takaya soul was never there from the start. It was Kagetora. He just can’t remember who he is or his past. (This might be wrong. I have hear and read somewhere that their is true)
2. (Can’t real answer this question. Very bad describing people.)
3. Yeah, I also notice the change in their eye. I say leave it alone as you describe them.
4. Please do not stop even though you did made some error. That alright. As long the story is great. It does matter if the story is correct or not. If you did stop, then I have no choice but cry my heart out. *sob* Don’t stop here. Continue the story at it is.

I did notice early how Takaya figure out about Minako was wrong and other things. I didn’t say... I mean I didn’t wrote anything because I want to see how you going put it to play for this story. I like it. Gomen for long review.

That was really yummy! Please write more! PLEASE! I really love this story.

Sorry it took me so long to review - I've been doing a bit of catching up in school.

In response to some of your questions: I don't know how to describe Naoe's hair color. The colors in the whole anime are so muted looking that it's sometimes hard to tell what colors they're supposed to be. In response to your first question, I think he knew everything at that point, so you should make this an AU (there's so much more that you can do if you write AU's - I do it all the time!)

But again, please keep going and I can't wait for more smut!

super!super! I awaited the continuation impatiently and I am not
disappointed!! please continue with more sex but how it is not the
last finally I require a little too much but I would like that it have
a continuation there after the act that takaya as opens him naoé
finally as they think if they really go form a couple finally here are
thing like that!! T inkiète not for the errors and continues because
it is really not serious!! I would also say that it is after mirroir
it that takaya remembered of minako and Naoe you can clearly say brown
for his hair in any case continues and that the continuation is made
because I languished soon and congratulation because it is a wonder!!!!

This is such a nice story! You have captured the personality of the characters well, and the storyline is such a great extension from the series and OVA that have been released so far. If only Mirage of Blaze will really take such a good turn concerning the relationship between Takaya and Naoe, then a lot of fans would be jumping with joy ;-) Please do write more soon! Because it doesn't seem like there will be a new OVA released any time soon and it is good to have a great quality story to read while us fans are waiting!

1) it is yes, sorry