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KEEP WRITING! GOD DAMN YOU! IF YOU STOP I'LL EXPLODE WITH UNDAUNTING RAGE! lol or dissappointment. I'm not too sure what happened with the mirror thing. i'm pretty sure that Takaya's and Kagetora's soul kind of merged together a little more, making the memories more present in his mind but not exactly clear. It's like Takaya because slightly multiple personality disorder-y...cause when there is danger or he is majorly pissed, there is more Kagetora and normally he's just Takaya with a splash of Kagetora (Mostly in the OVAs) Also, I think a good adjective for Naoe's hair color is 'cinnamon' brown or maybe 'chocolater'. It obvioulsy has to be named after food cause he's so yum-yum-yummy! (PS: Please keep writing this, it keeps me happy ^_~)

*Is on the floor with a major nose bleed and a puddle of salvia* Holy cannolis...that was ....hot...Gah! HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT!!! Yes more sex in the next chapter! Oh yes please please please! I love this story! I say make it AU why? Cause i might give wrong info too. XD I mean i know of MOB but i might have my info mixed up cause i usually do that alot, i confuse them with other animes or stories. XD I have that bad of a memory. Sorry i ain't no help. But the way you wrote it i see no biggie in it, it still did not lose the MOB feel, i say it is fine ya know. I love it. Keep it going the way it is. Too perfect to change or stop! Oh please DO NOT stop i would cry and die. Anyways loved this chapter you did such a gorgeous and oh so awesome job. Hot hot hot. Still drool. Must read part again. XD Great job. Update soon when you get the chance ya =3

wow hot chapter~! more sex? yes please~! ^_^ um about your question i can only say that i dont care so much that there are a few wrong detailes~ and please continue it since it's such a hot fic~! and i think you can say that Naoes hair is something like um light brown and why the hell did they change their eye colores in the movie is a complete mystery to me but good improvising on using them both~!

SO AWESOME. CAN'T WAITE FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER.

i bow down in my uter graditude for you. please continue with the fic. it's so good. it makes my heart start pumping and is very well written.PPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEaaaaaaaaaasssssssseeeeeeeee keep going.

Date rape....snerk...Takaya does have a sense of humor twisted enough.

Beautiful characterization again, Naoe had a warmth that didn't have to be directly convied, but still retained his strong personality. Well appreciated confessional, mildly rambling, but that holds true to form with the human desire to be understood. Takaya was a strong-willed brat and I loved him for it, excellent dissertation concerning Takaya's reaction to past event based on his own thoughts, very like him and his striving to emphasize his being his own person. Interested in seeing Takaya's responses as their relationship grows and he realizes, to a greater extent, what a Powerful factor Naoe has become in his life, human's being what we are and seeking to gain and develope connections with another. Probably gonna hit like a truck, and he may realize how he's become, in a fashion, dependent on Naoe for his strength and how he's so content with him. He might feel slightly angry at first, but I have the feeling that it's got the potential for insight, humor, and resulting sweetness.(look at me ramble...)

I believe that, with the memories beginning to be realized, that they, Takaya and Kagetora, may mesh. By that I mean the Takaya will be able to recall things and have more of the understanding held by Kagetora, not that the persons will necessaryily fuse. Takaya is the dominant personality, so I believe he will remain intact and, in fact, form the core being with Kagetora's memories as another layer or portion to his personality, but he will still be Takaya and will remain so even once he is again reicarnated, after all, he has become the central entity.

Dancing....my head connected with my desk, I couldn't take it...and that's just dancing!

Outrageously enjoyable so far, can't wait to see it progress,
Nacht

I like your fic, it is great!! I hope is not finish I like this is a continuation but the last chapter it's my prefer !!

wooow~ hot chapter~! please make more~!! love it ~ keep the good work up!

*hugs* That was hot!! I am nose bleeding!! Thank you thank you!! I loved it, if only it was longer >> =3 Kidding. It was hot and i loved it. I cannot wait to read more. I loved Naoe's confession it was so sweet and deep! Omg i also love the way you described how Takaya was feeling in the club! That was awesome detailing! I mean the way you explained it it was brilliant!! Lovely job! I enjoyed it and i so cannot wait for them to get it on! XD I mean takaya saying he will be getting some. Great job! I am so in love with it. Keep it up! Weee see you got my hyped up. =^o^=

Gah I haven't reviewed! Missed the updates my computer was down for a bit. Stupid machine! I must say the last chapter was sooooooooooooo steamy hot!! I loved it! Awesome job! Omg! I smell sex coming, please say I am right? Heh Oh man you know what would be hot!? If you make Takaya ride Naoe!! PLEASE PLEASE! For some odd reason i always wanted to read that! Ride em cowboy! XD I am sick. But i love it! Please update soon. Love the story ^_^