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Sex? Sex, sex sex? in the next chapter, yes? hahaa I love Predilection too btw

Your work is positively stunning...I love how, despite the utter chaos a torment around them, Naoe and Takaya are still being inexorably drawn together. My one concern is Naoe's feelings, oddly enough. Naoe states he has love for Lord Kagetora(a bastard, I agreed), and his base meaning is, what I gather, love for his soul, but then, what about Takaya. Yes, it is the same soul, so the core remains the same, but the people, due the difference cirmcustances of experience, developement, and a number of other things, are different. Takaya is not Kagetora, in soul, but not conciousness. So then, the question is, does Naoe love Takaya; actually, really, truly, and purely Takaya, not that which he represents, but Takaya. I know that didn't come out very clearly, and I tend to ramble and repeat myself, I, like Takaya, find it difficult to express my thoughts and ideas in words, though they make sense in my head, but, I hope you could understand at least the main idea I was trying so desperately to portray.

Very moving, I can't wait to observe as their emotions futher evolve,
Nacht



P.S. Sometimes Takaya does need a good kick in the head....but then again, he was sort of sniped by cupid, so I suppose we can cut him a little slack(which he has definitely used up by this time, I might add...stupid, emotionall dysfunctional...::grumble grumble:: )

Ujiteru's right hand man's name was Kotaru Fuuma of the Fuuma ninja clan. ^___^ Keep up the good work man! <3

It's good to have at least a little Kagetora bashing! He was a total bastard to Naoe and deserved at least some of what happened to him. I feel bad for how Takaya's life turned out, but the fact that he turned into just as much of a jerk as Kagetora annoys me. He should have learned from the past and treated people more decently. Anyway, sorry for the whining - I really loved this chapter and I hope Takaya isn't too mean to Naoe. Please keep going and update as soon as you can!

Poor naoe. Gosh i always cry everytime i read about how much he loves Kagetora and suffers for it. I love him but i love Takaya too, but i love them all. Anyways! Yay Dirty dancing!! You are the most grooviest author ever!!!!!! I love you!! Not in that way but love as in you are the coolest!!! Gratsi! Oh Kagetora's brother... i recall him but can't recall his name. grrr curse my memory. He was a ninja? O_o? Are you talking about that sexy ninja with long hair and tight black outfit? Or i am just to busy thinking about him. Hee. ^^';;;;; Love Haruie she so cool. Loved her thoughts about being a ninja very funny of her to come up with that. Anyways I hope you feel better. I mean with the cold and all. And take your time with the updates if you need to. No rush yes? Lovely chapter I think. I don't mind reading about Kagetora being such a bastard, makes him so cool....yes i am wierd. BUt i do not like him being mean to poor Naoe. Ahem! Soory for the long review i am so talkative today. O_O Loved the chapter. Thank you for it. Yay dirty dancing! Heh sorry i just can't wait for that part. Well then till next chapter bye bye and happy holidays! *^-^*

NO...NO... why do you have to stop here. Update soon. I need to know what happen. OMG... please update soon... I going crazy. I took me so long snice I read stroy between this two. Love them to death. hurry....AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA... I must know what going to happen next....just when i was into the story... aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah

And you leave it here! *cries*

Wonderful fic. I liked how you depicted them. God, those two need to have sex. They really need to.

This is great, so please keep going! Sorry I haven't reviewed 'til now - I'm at my fiance's parents house and haven't had much time to check stuff on the internet. But this is good and I can't wait to see how Haruie responds.

Yay dance club/bar!!! Will Naoe dance with Takaya? O_O OMG!! DIRTY DANCE DIRTY DANCE!!! XD Sorry sorry i love Haruie she is like the coolest, especially the way she is portrayed like a mother slash sister. Anyways great job, pleae update as soon as you can, cause i want to see how she will act from what Naoe told her and also to see what will happen. ^^

Oops! I didn't see the other chapters when I reviewed earlier... Argh! This just proves that I haven't been visiting adultfanfic for quite some time.
I feel so dumb ^__^
I love how the story is going though... with Minako and all. And I love how Takaya tries to keep his status as master, even though he's so messes up inside.
I feel like smacking Takaya, watching him treating his sister so rudely... even though it could be attributed to his presently screwed up mind.