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Nice start! About the direction of the plot... well, no matter what you do, try to add in as much angst as possible. A happy ending is sweet, but the road to a happy ending has to be as angsty one. That's what Mirage thrives on~ Lol ^__^

By the way, I'd love to see another OVA too, hopefully one with at least a kiss (obviously it'll be a forced kiss since they've not progressed much). But it'll take more then an ova for a resolution. Perhaps there should be a long anime TV series instead. Haha! I'm dreaming... >_<

Urk! I didn't realize this chapter was up! Argh! It would have made my day if I would have been paying attention! Oh well... I've read it now and I love it. Yeah, Naoe and Takaya really should be checked in somewhere. But we love them anyway. Please keep going and update as soon as you can! I have my last exam tomorrow so I'll finally be able to start writing again too!

By the way, I saw that someone wants an English translation of the manga. I know a site that has it ... well ... not all of it, but they have the first part and even a prequel! Maybe if enough people review and tell them to keep going they'll update sooner (but I think they are still on vacation right now.) Anyway, the site is http://asphodel.atspace.com/writing/translations/index.html

Go to that site and go to the bottom - they have both the translations alone and scanlations (higher on the page, a little above the prequel). The prequel is called Exaudi Nos and is a really good story about stuff that happened to Naoe before he knew that Kagetora had come back. It's sad, but it's good.

Have fun!!!!!!

Oh, this was just lovely! There aren't many Mirage flicks out there and here is one that's well written and sexy and interesting ... whee! I was so happy to see it. You definitely have Takaya's character down! Naoe's, too. I, like you, thought that Naoe raped Minako, but I thought he did it when Kagetura was in that body ... hmmm, the series is so hard to follow in some respects. I've heard that the manga its based on is huge with even more history and stuff. So probably there's more explanation in it. I've looked for an English translation, but no luck. Anyways, I love what you are doing. So please keep up the good work and I look forward greatly to the next chapter!

Poor Takaya. Loved the attotude between him and his sister, only thing though, you wrote her name Miyu later on. anyways keep up the great job. cannot wait to read more ^^

i'm glad someone's finally doing a MOB fic again. You write very well. keep it up! ^_^)v

Sorry your reviews got erased!!!!!!!! What I said in mine was the usual "love the fic" things, plus I said that I thought that Naoe might have raped Minako before he put Kagetora into her body (but it's really hard to tell.) But anyway, I love this story and can't wait until you update again!

I realy like this story. I hope you are not stoping somewhere in the midle. I realy want to know how it ends.
And I can tell you germans look nothing like Naoe (sadly) but if you find a one like him tell me

This was just amazing! The first part was funny - the thing about the little white line in the elevator. I wonder what Naoe was thinking about, though. All of the "accidental" flirting was great! I'm glad Naoe laughed and showed Takaya how cute he is - and I'm really glad that Takaya decided to *actually* flirt with him. But now he's starting to panic. Poor kid. Anyway, sorry for the randomness and I can't wait to read more, so update whenever you can! I've been studying for my finals, but I take time to read this fic 'cause it rocks!

Nice story. Great characterization! I really love how we can look into Takaya\'s thoughts and perspective.
Please continue soon!