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Just finished reading chapter 15! I liked it very much! Especially how you portrayed Naoe. Please update again soon! :) Can't wait for next chappie!

Thanks so muuuuuuuuuuuuch for the updates. I've been anxiously waiting for you to continue with more sinful chapters. And again you don't disapoint. Fucking Fabulous doesn't even cover how good the story is going. One of the favorite parts of reading your fic (besides the hot smex) is how well you capture Naoe's desperation. Half the time it seems he will literally devour Takaya whole. But Takaya can handle his own when it comes to Naoe. Woo-hoo, don't get me started on the smex scenes, I think I need a cigarette after having read the last one. Do please continue writing the great fic as RL will allow you. Many thanks for posting and sharing.

Even though the lemon was written really well in this chapter, I couldnt help but feel incredibly sad while reading it. You did a great job depicting Naoe's desperate nature but still, it makes me sad knowing that its so difficult for them to find a common ground in between Naoe's desperateness and Takaya's unwillingness to be submissive. And although I really want them to end up in a happy place with each other, I dont think they ever can, considering theyre personalities. Please continue writing, i love this fic!

OMG this chapter left me speechless, ghosts and omg the last part where Naoe was so desperate and did what he did to Takaya! Gasp i was like dang man rape! But hmmmmm would it be rape, after all takaya did tell him to stop and he did cry. And remember folks no means no. heh i think this chapter was deep and i love it! Great job like always keep it up!

This has to be one of the best MoB fics that I've come across in a long time. I read through all 14 chapters in one sitting. The characters are so IC that as I read, I truly feel that this is a continuation of the series. Great job and I look forward to chapter 15.

I adore you for updating! *glomps* Enjoyed this chapter very much! Hooray for blowjobs!

Cellphones are evil! Anyway...great chapter! Loved the scene between Naoe and that one woman teacher "Fangirls. All of them." Great line.

Ah Irobe, the novels start out with him and Naoe talking. It's how you find out Naoe tried to kill himself. Did the anime hint at that, what wrist was Naoe's watch on? Can't remember... Anyway... Great chapter! This is greatest MoB fic ever written! Please update soon!

Oh and here's a url to chapter one of translated novel: http://www.asphodelshaven.com/writing/translations/4n_mob_exaudinos_ch1.html?seenIEPage=1 in case you're interested :)

Oh wow, I stayed up to 3am last night reading this story, which i finally finished today. Please add another chapter soon!! Will Takaya ever tell Naoe that he loves him? Oh I hope so. Great, good, and awesome job so far!!! :-)

I'm so sad to hear that your ending the story...soon.....but i suppose...the ending got to come sooner or later...i've enjoyed the fic......for the longest time....Hopefully after this one ...you'll write more......I do love this couple the most...cause of their...doom relationship.....God....i'm such a SAP....
Well....i hope to read...a few more chap....from you....I'm looking forward...to it......keep it...up...your one of my fav.....writer....to read...from.....
PLAESE UPDATE SOON......
NINA