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May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was just so... I can't even explain what I'm thinking right now. Came close to crying when I read this though.
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know this started out good and you should have stuck to that but nooooooo You had to be A STUPID ( cussing you out becuz your a bleep bleep bleep) I hate you and you should never right about that again...AND YUKI AND SHUICHI ARE MENT FOR EACHOUTHER!!!
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay. That was very depressing. I am trying desperately not too cry here. (In the middle of the library). But at least the two of them are together.
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was powerful.
The way you portrayed the emotions was amazing, I snivvled a lot in the last chapter when the officer was explaining everything to tohma. I almost cried, but everytime I do that someone walks in.
This has gone on my reccomended readings list (I'm not logged in but my penname is sylver phantasy) I love it.
I say write what Tohma's going to do, I'd love to see those bastards pay for what they did. No one kills off our beloved Shuichi and Yuki and gets away with it.
The way you portrayed the emotions was amazing, I snivvled a lot in the last chapter when the officer was explaining everything to tohma. I almost cried, but everytime I do that someone walks in.
This has gone on my reccomended readings list (I'm not logged in but my penname is sylver phantasy) I love it.
I say write what Tohma's going to do, I'd love to see those bastards pay for what they did. No one kills off our beloved Shuichi and Yuki and gets away with it.
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is haunting. I just knew by the title I should not read it, but did anyway. In the real world my boys are just manga an anime. In the world of fiction that some of us go to at times they are much more. Needless to say I found this story to be happy, depressing, beautiful an ugly. In the few chapters you took the reader from smiles to tears. If the mood strikes again to write about gravi (Shu/Yuki), please reverse the order. Tears first and smiles at the end. My boys have enough trouble as it is.
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I certainly wasn\'t expecting that. My stomach was churning along with Suguchi\'s. I understand your reticence in continuing this, but maybe one day when your in a lighter mood an epilogue would be possible? My mind had already skipped forward to press releases about Shuichi and Eiri\'s deaths and some sort of anti homophobe vigil being set up or campaign so their deaths didn\'t seem so pointless.
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how sad! A brutal reminder of how quickly life can change....
I once read a fic where Yuki was worried that Shuichi was leaving him because Shuichi suddenly didn\'t like to be touched...in the end it turned out Yuki was insane and Shuichi had died in a car accident 3 years before and the Shuichi he thought he was living with was actually Ryuichi. When Yuki finally realized all this, the shock was too much for him to handle and he died. It was my first Gravitation death fic...(goes off to cry somewhere)
I once read a fic where Yuki was worried that Shuichi was leaving him because Shuichi suddenly didn\'t like to be touched...in the end it turned out Yuki was insane and Shuichi had died in a car accident 3 years before and the Shuichi he thought he was living with was actually Ryuichi. When Yuki finally realized all this, the shock was too much for him to handle and he died. It was my first Gravitation death fic...(goes off to cry somewhere)
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*SWEARS LOUDLY* OMG!!!!!....well you were right it did take a mojor turn from where it looked to be heading....That was just TOO SAD!!!! I think I will go cry now.
But however sad and depressing it was it was REALLY good. I love your stories they always have feeling to them. XD
But however sad and depressing it was it was REALLY good. I love your stories they always have feeling to them. XD
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting beginning. I like established relationship fics, but why do I have this feeling that something is going to go wrong and that Seguchi is behind it?