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for Depravity

by ffpandayaoi

person darkringmaster
schedule April 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I must say, I was very impressed with the research that has gone into your story. I myself am a Dom in a D/s relationship, and your way of writing reflects the lifestyle well. It's even given me some ideas for my sub! I'm sad to see that it's incomplete, but I do understand, life happens. Wonderful job up to this point though!
schedule July 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey Sweetie! I'm just wondering are you going to update at all? Or are you okay? I've been following this story since you last updated and I really do love it. I occasionally go back to it to reread my favorite scenes and love the romance that's mixed with the sexual things. And because of you, I tried checking out the 'Sleeping Beauty' Stuff from Anne Rice :D I never really got that far *shrugs*

I hope that you are doing well, I read about the doctor's appointments and I can relate, but since we haven't heard from you in such a long time, I've been kind of worried. Not just about the fact that you might never update again... But mostly about the fact that no one should be sick for so long if that's been the case.

I do hope you update soon, but if not, atleast can you give us an author's note about how you're doing? Just so we don't worry?

Also, I would like to sing some praises to you because you wrote Shuichi and Eiri so beautifully and that romance of Hiro and Suguru is really cute. I love the dom/sub names. "Sensei and Usegi" :D They're really sweet and I'd like to see abit more of Mistress Tenshi, maybe in the "real" world? Maybe she runs into Shuichi on the street or something cutsy/funny like that. :) I really enjoy your OC people. Renji was cute. And I can't wait to see the first mentoring scene between Hiro and Yuki, should be scary and exciting.... *wink*

And just a little question...if Shuichi bleached his butt... wouldn't he never be able to compete again because of the discoloration? I mean, I've seen people (and no offense to them for having this condition) Whose hands are bleached and it looks....odd. Not gross or anything, but jsut strange, wouldn't that be bad for him to do that to himself? OUtside of the realm of being incredibly funny?

Okay I think that's a long enough review! I hope you're doing okay!

:D
person Ayana
schedule April 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omg...if you do not continue this story..I think my heart will explode...just warning you
person catti
schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW..its been over two years since an update...hope everything is well and good in your health...catti
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ffpanda.. when are ya gona update~~~~?
person LKLTB
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ummm... Are you still writing this story? Because I think it's amazing and I'd love for it to continue...
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haven't seen much of you on here nor on LJ (then again I haven't been heard of much either :P only difference is you are a wonderful writter and no one reads my stuff XD). I just hope everything is well and that you're remembering that you're awesome! ^o^
person gazelovr
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just thought I'd check in. I keep hoping for an update of this awesome story and Depravity 1.0 for that foursome, but I've not seen anything. I'm hoping that your health has improved and that you enjoyed your vacation with AshCat. I also hope that you haven't lost the motivation to write this story. It's so involved, intriguing and artfully written that I can't help but be drawn into the character's lives and am very much looking forward to seeing all the hot sceneing, including Hiro and Suguru's advancement into BDSM. Please take care of yourself and keep up your hard work.

Thanks, Oakie
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
updaaaateee~~~ pleeaasseeeee~~~
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayy~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you cant end it like that!!!! no no no ~ update quickly~!!!!

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