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OMIGOSH!!! I cannot begin to describe how much I love this fic!! I must admit at first I was a bit hesitant about reading it because of the whole BDSM thing but I must say you really proved me wrong, this fic just paints a whole new world of sexuality and relationships and your writing style (which is fantastic by the way) just adds more to this fantastic story. And above all else from the way you write you can actually tell that you know what you're talking about! You have no idea what a breath of fresh air that is (to me, at least ^_^). This story is so in-depth into the world of BDSM it's made me read up on a few things that I could do sometime *wink, wink*. I love this fic, please don't stop writing it, I'd love to see where else it's going.

i love your fan fic i can't wait till you update it again i also enjoy all your other fics

Damn, that was hot. I'm gonna go take a shower now. Awesome work.

Absolutely fabulous! I love Shuichi's sass translating into pony behavior, Suguru and Hiro's mix of excitement and uncertainty, the trust, the COSTUMES, and the Resort Owner! Such a lovely, classy, wicked, delightfully kinky lady. If I haven't said so earlier, I adored Shuichi biting that fangirl- how horribly rude she was, and between the bite and the backhand she certainly got what she deserved!
^^ The pony-play in this story is a lot of fun in general. It's a closer look at an aspect of kink I'd only skimmed- and those were the English pony-cart resorts (less sex, more stables). It's enchanting how like and how UNlike real ponies and horses pony boys and girls can be. All the best parts of a show pony, with the mucking, worming, mashed toes, and leaning optional.

So thank you! The amount of care you take with the details of this story is wonderful, fabulous, laudable, any adjective you want, it's yours. I enjoy the links at the end- it lets me further my education. Keep writing, please, and thank you for sharing!

Ahaha!

I've read the remixes, and I agree, they're a little too intense for my style as well.

I'm extremely anti-rape.

If you were to ever incorperate rape into this fic, I'm sorry to say that I'd have to stop following it.

But you forgot to mention the parts of the series where Hiro has a rape fantasy including Shuichi after watching him get fucked up the ass by Yuki.

OOH! Or where Hiro gets ass-raped by K. And later his brother. Can't remember his name.

Then there's the bit where Taki get's raped repeatedly by Ma-kun.

Methinks that's his name...

Meh...

Anywho, yeah, I just think it's hilarious that you're getting criticized by people who knew from the beginning that this would be a BDSM story because it contains important aspects of the BDSM society.

DON'T READ STORIES YOU DON'T AGREE WITH, THEN CRITICISE IT, PEOPLE!

Ehem, that said, I'm looking forward to the next installment of Depravity, and I can't wait to see if Shuichi wins his "reward."

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Toodles!!

hey i've been reading 4 a while n i think it's really good, i'm really into it and so are a few of my m8s so i'd really love if u keep it going thanx luvya Aya-chan

- “What? You don’t believe me? Just who is in charge here?” He realized too late that he walked right into that one and the sound of his libido laughing at him echoed through his mind. -

OMFG!!!! I about died laughing when I read that. Awesome! I just found this story last night and I have been doing my best to make it all the way through, unfortunately something keeps coming up and I have to take breaks. I am so glad that someone is doing a BDSM for this pair. I have been daydreaming about it since I saw that seen in the OVA.

Okay I am going to go read some more.

Wow, this story is surprisingly really hot... thanks for writing it~

Oh, my god, when I get into a serious relationship, I'm gonna train my partner to come to "Beam me up, Scottie!"

Poor freak, he'll never be able to watch Star Trek again...

Not that he'd want to...

I'm gonna go read the next chapter...

*whistles "Love will keep us Together" be Captain and Teneal*

Toodles!!

Think of me, babe, whenever...

Wow. I'll never look at Gravitation the same way ever again.