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9_9 Now, really. There's so much talking that goes on in EPE that when it's done right, couples therapy is superfluous.

...I know it's odd to somepeople. And it can be damaging. And... whatever. Shuichi was punished because his screwup was in an area of their lives that has punishment as a consequence. It would have felt unfinished to him otherwise, and when there's a concrete, finite aspect to fallout it's that much easier to put it behind you and learn from it. Human behavior is a funny thing.

ffpanda, Eiri's domination was so. damn. hot. And I spent the aftermath cackling. He can deal with being dominated, he just can't deal with _liking_ it. That's so him.

Shuichi's punishment... is appropriate. Well, maybe not appropriate for what did happen, but appropriate for what could have happened, if he continues to talk without thinking about where he is. I'm not him... but when I think of things that mean as much to me as his collection obviously means to him, I'd have been so relieved that nothing was going up in flames at that point that five days would have felt like NOTHING at that moment. The depth of the punishment wouldn't have kicked in until at least twelve hours to a day later.
...then again, I tend to think I deserve whatever I get.

KUDOS, ffpanda! The sex is, as always, hot. I snickered so hard at Tohma walking in on the aftermath of the phone sex. XD Bad Luck really is going to kill him one of these days. ^___^

Whoot....WHOOT thanks again for another GREAT chappie! Poor Tohma though...LOL...he has had a rough few days! Keep up the great work, can't wait to see more!

SeveredWings

u no, the way yuki treated shu in this chapter was seriously not cool. he acts likes a control-freak and if somebody i loved treated me like that i would be serously mad at them but shu acts like some of abused child and doesn't fight back. hiro and fujisaki were hot, tho.

Great absolutely great chapter!!!!!!!!!1 I love the phone sex and that Thoma was listening . I laughed my ass off at the last and clapped my hands and would have given you a standing ovation if you could have seen it. Love this It is the best and most fun , I always have goose bumps at somethime during the reading of a chapter. Congrats!!!!!!

Heh. Shu's cruising for a bruising... well more like fucking but that doesn't rhyme now does it?

Looking forward to what Yuki says to Tohma with great anticipation.....he he hehe......I can't wait. I am enjoying this very very much. It is my guilty pleasure.:)

Very well done! And I love the piccy! Can't wait for more.

SeveredWings

I figured it was about time that I quit lurking about and give you a review. I really wish I could have included a picture with this, but I've had terrible artist block for a good while now. Once that block goes away I will be sure to doodle something up for you as a proper thanks. This is a wonderful story though. I'll be keeping my eyes open for a new chapter.

-ari-

sweet, what the hell is Eiri gonna do??? lol but yea Update soon!!!

Good story, Eri should give the brat a good discipline otk spanking, corner time and then some comfort.