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for Depravity

by ffpandayaoi

schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y96/adancefortwo/yuki.jpg okay so I spoke to soon... it's not the best. I really wish that I could have inked it, but it's not the worst either. I wouldn't exactly call it work safe either. Have fun with it, I know I had fun drawing it. I actually had to get out my chaps that I haven't worn in years and put them on to see exactly how they looked on a body. I of course woke my girlfriend up to have a little playtime once I had them on, but that is a different story. This is just a thank you and good job.

-ari-
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was great ^^ Can't wait for more

*camps out at this story*
person Saori
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg...that was so mean! Leaving it on a cliffy like that!! AHHHH!!!

<3 your story, the BEST Gravitation fic i\'ve ever read!

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!
person Ayeshagirl
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yuki is so hot as an uke. And Hiro should just tell Suguru because you only regret the things you dont do. ^_^
person Sesshomarulover132
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sorry to hear that u got sick! I hope you feel better soon!^.^ You keep getting better and better. I loved how you made
Shu on top. He fit Dom perfectly. I hope Hiro and his lover get to play real soon! Get better quick! Please?XD
person Tina
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
There's another chapter coming out?! OMG, I look foward to it! Who knew Shuichi could actually come up with all that. I say, he should do another scene again and make it even more exotic, but that's up to you ^_^ I really enjoyed it and am looking foward to see what you write next!
person fuzzybunnytoo
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Shu made a great Dom and i am so proud of him. This was maybe the best chapter yet because it made Eiri so vulnerable. Love the chapter,,,,think I need a cold shower now, Smiles. you are the greatest!
person Luciology
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope you're over the worst of the flu by now. Your temperature may be lower but mine has risen after such a hot scene. I especially liked the use of the mirror in the final part & the fact that their love for each other shows through.
person Luciology
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PS. What did Eiri say to Tatsuha?
person Tyson
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was so pro haha lol i loved it lol hahaha shuichi lo just great lol update soon plez

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