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for Depravity

by ffpandayaoi

person fuzzybunnytoo
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was just reading and enjoying it very much and looked for the next chapter button and ....no button ....I am at the end and i am needing more so please hurry and update. I never knew I had this in me to enjoy something like this but wow.....interesting...learn something new every day dont we? Kepp up the good work!
person luciology
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Tatsuha is a real arse at times. I hope we're going to be privy to what Eiri has to say to him. Good for Mika for being understanding and inviting Shu over to see the baby. Well, the great 'in control Eiri' is not infallable and I'm glad he knows it & is prepared to make up for his mistake by allowing Shu to be the Dominant. One of the things that I really like about this story is that it is set several years post Vol 12, they have matured & clearly love each other.
person fuzzybunnytoo
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM

Am enjoying this very much . it is very different and am laughing and panting at the same chapters. Good for you , Keep it up.
person Rachel
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have read every chapter, word for word, and at some parts, couldn't stop laughing until I was turning purple. I must say, This has got to be one of the best fics I have ever read. It is very interesting how you got everything set up and my all time favorite part HAS to be the resturant. I can actually picture my best gay guy friend Ben and his boyfriend Tom doing stuff like this lol I have even named then Yuki and Shuichi cuz they act exactly like them! >.> strange... anyway, update soon! I must know what Shu-chan has in mind!
person Ayeshagirl
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww... Shu-chan is so cute sometimes! So is Yuki!!!!!!! My throat hurts...
person PAINOHPAIN
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
For heaven's sake (or SS's sake) get that poor boy some Nads BEFORE the Big Weekend at Depravity! Honest to gawd, the stuff works...but you have to get the real thing, not a cheap ripoff. Smoother results, lasts longer and none of those ... er ... nasty little side effects you so ... eloquently inflicted on him.

I know, I know...some people really get off on the whole shaving thing, but trust me, high amusement potential for our favorite sadistic author...and he'd have to help...I don't care HOW flexible Shuichi is! However...serious learning curve here, so they have to get onto it early. It'll last through the weekend (several weekends), no problem, but they'll need a couple of days to ... perfect their technique.

No...I'm not a shareholder! I only wish. And don't trust the commercials or the included instructions/video tape. Just in case you take pity on the poor boy and give him the option, tell him:

A) get at least three, possibly four of the kits...you'll need all the little cloth squares and...you'll use it. It doesn't go nearly as far as they claim!

B) Use the prep soap and the after-cream. Makes a real difference in the effectiveness of the process, and the lotion (kiwi-chamomille) smells incredible and leaves the skin REAL soft (Yuki will like that).

C) Heat it first...a new jar takes about 30 sec in a microwave...only, Shuuichi, love, make sure you take off ALL the protective foil first. Eiri will not appreciate fireworks in his MW.

D) Don't use the dumb little spatula they give you...get a good three inch wide teflon scraper from the local fancy-cookery place.

E) They say you can reuse the squares...ha! not usually.

F) Practice practice practice...and start on the lower leg, where the skin is toughest.

G) HOLD THE SKIN TIGHT WHEN YOU PULL THE STRIP OFF!!!!! (This is why Yuki HAS to help.)

H) When you get to the sensitive areas, have ice ready. (Yes, Shu, ICE) you can get little blood spots where the hairs come out, but these go away quickly (overnight at the longest).

The results? NO INGROWN HAIRS, NO ITCHING! Trust me, Shu, it's worth it.

(Seriously, I just put in the tips that would be useful to me, were I writing the scene in question.)

Getting a huge kick out of this story. Obviously a subject near and dear to the author's heart, well understood, and the characters are delightfully consistent with MM's.
person Shu-chan
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is by far the bestest fic ever. If I were Eiri, I'd KILL Tatsuha and he was soooo sweet with Shu. YAY!! CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!
person Tyson
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ah cool i really liked this chapter thats like all i can say i just loved it Plez update soon i wanna see what Shuichi has planned for Eiri heh
person Ayeshagirl
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Shuichi... he's never gonna be able to look Tatsuha in the eye again!
person FlyOnTheWall
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow! i CANT WAIT to see what shuichi has planned for yuki!! hee hee...*evil smile* so, please HURRY!!! i wanna seeee!! *whines* cant wait! byes

oh, and good chapter too! ;)

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