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YIPPEE SKIPPYYYYY Shuichi a DOM! This should be entertainning! *Grins*...I have faith in you to make it good...yer real good! Can't wait until next chappie!

SW

XD Oh, poor Shuichi. Poor, poor baby. Not that I PITY him or anything... or am going to stop laughing... but AH HA HA HA HA poor little guy. I hope he brings that up in future arguments.
"Well -YOU- FORGOT ME while you were arguing with your asshole brother!"

As for Tatsuha, I would've hit him a lot sooner than Yuki did, which says something, given that I'm a lot less violent than Yuki. Of course, me hitting him wouldn't have done a lot, so... XD It's better that Yuki did it. Yuki's willing to do MORE than hit his brother when he deserves it.

And Hiro? X3 heeee... While I appreciate the awkwardness of having to have The Talk with anyone, about anything... it's really not fair to Suguru to spring that on him. *Snickering* However, FAIR has no part in fun fics! :D I kinda hope Suguru turns it over on him and shocks Hiro's socks off in a very pleasant way.

wow iv read lots of slash but never anyting so intence

Oh GODS...if the story alone wasn't enough to keep me coming back, the little pics and tidbits would be! LOL..the toilet usage was great! And I am not even going to touch the pics of Shu and Eiri, that will remain silent. But, DAMN, you ARE freaking amazing. I love the idea of those two like that, and you pull off the scenes with such taste. No matter how dirty and raunchy they are, you still make them so very erotic and beautiful.

I have kept up with this story from the beginning, and will stay until the end! And kudos to you for regular updates...*Glomps ffpanda*...for this I LOVE YOU! Keep up the great work, and drop an email by me if you ever want to chitchat. I am sure you would be very interesting to 'talk' with.

Can't wait to see more,
SeveredWings

SeveredWings22@yahoo.com

i have been reading ure story from the very begining but never knew what to say in a review...but now i know...after the last chapter...i realized u are SADISTIC! lol what u did to shuichi was horrible...yet i laughed my ass off....if i was shuichi i would have smacked eiri and walked out of the restuarant and have been like u bastard or something lol....anyways keep up the great fic cant wait to read more...mwahs

You keep getting better and better!

Oh...my...GOD! Awesome story! Yuki as a dom *drool*, absolutly yummy!

I know why hiro and suguru coulnt hold their voices XD

I googled that too XD

mmm

good going ^_^

What a fantastic thing to come home to - 4 deliciously hot chapters. God, I love this story so much.

This is an amazingly written, stunningly tasteful (both literally and figuratively), and just plain all-around good and hot. :D This is a fantastic fanfiction, I've read a lot of them, trust me. Very few have been this much of a turn on, and at first I really wasn't sure if I should get into it at all, considering the aspect of pain usually offputs any arousal to me. But here...it's so expertly written that it's hard not like it, for lack of beter terms (^,^) Anyways, to get on with the point, amazing story, and I can't wait to read more from you! (The Birthday fic is also one of my favorites by the way hehe)

Your Adoring Fan,
~Nite