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i LOVE this story. brings back some wonderful memories :):) um i was just wondering if u were going to continue this story?

Wow. Your story is just wonderful. I read the whole thing over a period of 2 days (I even stayed up until 3 AM just to try to finish reading). I found your story due to a recommendation by Hestia. I never read or watched any Gravitation before but your story was still written in such a way that I didn't have to know the characters before I read the story. Since reading I have researched Gravitation (as well as D/s and BDSM) and I'm now a fan of Gravitation as well. Thanks for writing this story. I hope you will be able to update soon. I also hope that your health is improving. I'm a medical technologist so when you talked about lab work (blood, urine etc) over on live journal I do know what you are talking about. Again, thanks for writing this story and for including the info on live journal about D/s and BDSM - I found this all very interesting.

utter perfection. every chapter is so freakin' HOT!!! the scening, the aftercare, the banter, all of it is so perfect for the characters and their situations. this is such a well thought out balance of lust and tenderness, it makes me melt in all ways imaginable:) so wonderful!!! looking forward to the next chapter XD

I need to point out, that Hiro proved himself to be a really bad master. Okay so Shigure needs to learn how to control himself right? So Hiro punishes him, makes him wear womens underwear and says he can't cum. Thats his punishment.

So Hiro now decides he wants to know Shigure's limit and purposely pushes him past his limit. Then punishes him for breaking the rules. I'm sorry but this is rediciously stupid. If there had been any sense of what a master should be doing...If anyone should have been punished it should have been HIRO.

Hiro broke his own rule by >>purposely<< pushing Shigure past his limit. Maybe your forgeting, but a uke is punished for when the uke breaks a rule. Not for when the seme breaks his own rule by forcing him into it.

As of right now, Hiro is very irresponsible, and has no clue how to respect his uke. You really need to change this. Cuz Hiro really pissed me off by doing that.

Pushing Shigure past his limit. Maybe your forgeting, but a uke is punished for when the uke breaks a rule. Not for when the seme breaks his own rule by forcing him into it.

As of right now, Hiro is very irresponsible, and has no clue how to respect his uke. You really need to change this. Cuz Hiro really pissed me off by doing that.

sorry for doing that double review. Theres a letter cap I didn't know abouot, and wanted to post the entire review. Your more then welcome to email me with yr response :)

I hope you get some time to work on this soon! Wow! It's a crime to say it, but I like this vision of the future after Grav. vol. 12 better than Grav EX #1. Oddly enough did you see Shuichi's fantasy of being Yuki's slave in that?? Maybe the canon is headed this way . . .

Anyway--what do I say? You're affecting my own writing--I've suddenly got a spanking scene and a paddling scene in my own fanfic that is pretty OCC!

Pretty amazing stuff!

I really like the Hiro/Suguro story also--it's interesting to see that one develop!

I would just like to congratulate you on a very good story so far and just thought I’d let you know that I just finished reading your story twice and plan on reading it again, there are only two other Fan Fictions that I have read more than once, and I really enjoy this story line. I wish you lots of luck with Depravity and Depravity 1.0. And I hope that you are able to update soon.
Your Fan,
-ShuTohma-

Happy Chinese New Year! I'm so glad to see that you've updated so recently, even though I've already read this chapter on the gurabiteshiyon site a while ago, I'm filled with new hope that your health has improved and that we can expect new chapters for both Depravity and Depravity 1.0. I love this story very much and can't wait to read more "depraved" hotness from your talented and beautifully erotic mind. Thanks for all your hard work and best wishes on all your endeavors this New Year.

Ahh! Oh poor shu-chan, bleach burns hurt! well, the one on my face did, anyway (bad hair-dying experience...o_0)

anyway, i just have to say thank you for giving me such great entertainment for a week! i love the Shu/Yuki pairing, and their BDSM lifestyle is completely plausible! plus, seeing Yuki be all fluffy is kinda fun. :) can't wait for what comes next!