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Hello,

Wow, this story has been incrediable, and after reading all of it,While I find that I could not be in any BDSM types of relationships, I like what you done and will be able live out whatever, if any, future desire to have them through this story.

I'm not into BDSM, to me, it just seems wrong to hurt or dominate someone you love, even if it is consensuel and erotic to each partner, but thats just me. I don't disregard it or anything, and don't disspprove it,I'm very opened mind.

I do love this so far though. Its wonderful, and unlike everyother lemon story I've read, you've managed to make a plot out of this, Great job.

Sorry this review wasn't as long as my other one, but all I wnated to say was terrific job and I'm looking forward to the next chapter

Cheers
Crmy

Whoa!!!! this is seriously intense. I'm only just finishing up chapter 17, and am sorry to say I won't be able to continue reading until this afternoon (School) But I've stayed up all night, because truthfully, I've been avoiding reading this fiction. I missed understood the summary and thought it was a HxS. Thank God its not. EirixShu are so ment to be, I can't stand to see them with anyone else.

I know you've already written them, but I'm looking forward to more sub-drops from Shu. I'm an angst lover to the extremes. I'll be truthfull, I do love Shuichi, but i love when he is self harmful/depressed/suicidal/etc. Theses sub-drops seem to be somewhat in those catagories...Somewhere.

I do like this. I have to ask though, did you amek any of the scene scenes up, or anything relating to them? You seem pretty well educated on the matter, so just wondering.

Anyway, like I said, even if it is smut-centered(something i usually tried to avoid) Its wonderful, you've done a fantastic job so far, and I will of course review again, but it might not be until the last chapter you have posted so far, whats the point in reviewing every chapter? *sighs* i just wanted to let you know this is coming out nicely so far. I have been extremely turned on more times to night then in a month, lol.

Sorry didn't mean to ramble.

Also, you should know, When I DO decided to review a fanfiction, I hand out a bucket load of critism(some stories are just that bad, that they desevred it) their are the occasion EXCEPTIONAL one, in which I take the time to dish out praise as its deserved.

Sorry rambling again, i promise to be back at my computer as soon as i get home from school, contining to read faithfull

Cheers
Crmy

You updated just the day after I finished reading all chapters that were there xD And I love you so much more now ^__^ You're amazing and I'm so addicted to this story :) And I wanna see Shuichi get his collar xD

Btw.I friend added your LiveJournal so please add me back ^___^ *does puppy dog eyes*

God! I just read all chapters and I'm truly amazed *_____________* Girl,you're just so fucking amazing :) I look forward to next chapters ^____^

omg, you updated! i have been waiting for this update for so long!! and i really want to see shu get his new collar. this was absolutely fantastic, and i can't wait for your next update!!

*giggling* Oh gosh... ohhh... HEE HEE HEE HEE. Cattle prods on EBAY (yeah, they're on there) and snuggles and "...wait, I didn't mean to do that" and giggling HEE.
Good show!

Very interesting chapter. I like the fact that Eiri used his promise to Shuichi as also a test. Also, the fact that deep down, Hiro is just as sadistic as Eiri is. I can't wait until the next chapter comes out ^_^

~*~Tina~*~

I have just recently read over the long break i was having and i just wanted to say i loved it! i cant wait for more of it to be posted! its one of the best gravi fics ive read lately. im anxious to know about shu's prior punishment (giddy with suspense) and to see what they do next. normally i dont like the parings with hiro in them but i liked urs hiro and suguru make a cute couple! >.< i cant stand it when yuki or shu is with hiro or someone else they are supposed to be together but thats just my opinion (chuckles).keep it up and i cant wait to read more!

I love this story please update soon ^^ but would like to see more HiroXSuguru action.

OMG! =O Uve read this on gurabation.net!!!!! I love it so much, plese update!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!