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For the last 2 weekends I have put off cleaning and typical house work to read this story! It saddens me that I'm actually caught up! I guess it's back to the Cinderella life next weekend.
In an ironic twist of events I was RPing on Yahoo (My major hobby and sin. My Character being Yuki Kitazawa and my partner currently is Tohma Seguchi) when my mood changed. I was reading Depravity between posts and suddenly I found myself submerging into the world of BDSM with Tohma. The strangest part was when Tohma welcomed it without question. Thanks to ideas and inspiration from your story I have found my single best BDSM rpger in YEARS! Thank you! I love this story to no end and I think you've captured the character perfectly. I only wish you could translate this to Japanese and pass it along to Maki Murakami. I'm sure she would turn it into a new Megamix, or at least she should! (And in case you're curious... Yuki Kitazawa is a Seme Sub in my RPG)

Dude, I was just at ff.net, and there's someone there who claims that there's a gay rapist gang in Detroit that rapes people and sends in pictures of it to anime and manga publishers for ideas.

On top of all that, he claims that the gang is responsible for Gravitation, and that he knew the pink-haired boy whom they raped for it.

So I came here to read something to comfort myself, and I found this chapter, so thank you.

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He also talked about living on the streat, saying that he began writing fanfiction with chalk on the streets (after learning to read and write from a killer named Four-eyed Joe, of course), when he got raped himself.

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I just don't know how someone could write something like that. Anyone comfortable lying like THIS...

It just sickens me.

All of his stories were parodies, attacking the yaoi genre and anyone who indulges in it. Most of them were Gravitation.

The fucker said that he was NOT a homophobe, and that anyone who didn't appreciate his "humor" either had no sense of humor or was a "fag."

JESUS!!!

Anywho, I'm sorry, it's 11:30 at night, and I'm the only one awake in my house, so I didn't have anyone else to rant at.

I'm just so PISSED!!

GOD!!!!

Ehem, I'm getting all worked up again, so I'm gonna go read some more shit.

Toodles...

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE OH MY GOD EEEEEE!
*takes a few moments to gasp and pant, then resumes the fangirl dance*
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
I _love_ the training of a new slave- that one, perfect moment when independence shifts over into obedience. It's a moment that never truly comes again, ever, even if the slave doesn't remain with that master.

Shuichi and Yuki snuggling in the morning, with Shuichi in the sunny spot was really cute too. ^___^
Thank you so for a lovely chapter, and I look forward to more!

Suguru's mind is fascinating... as was that fur glove. Highly interesting.

That was really great! I had no idea there was so much to BDSM, apart from being great entertainment and entirely hot...it's actually really interesting to see all the aspects of it. Did you make up the idea of the rabbit fur glove or did you see it somewhere? If you did find it elsewhere I was wondering if you could find a picture or something? Much aprreciated! Update soon!!

Hi there. Xephyr here. I haven't left you a review yet. I wanted to get all up to date, read all you wrote before I said anything. Well, I just finished chapter twenty-seven, and I wanted to leave you this. Okay, first off, you rock. So much. I can't stress what a wonderful writer you are, and how much I look forward to more of this story. ^_^ Second, you have helped me completely clear the fog in my head. See, I had vague ideas about certain quirks I have floating around my brain. You gave those ideas a body and a name. And an outlet, I hope to find soon. So, back to your rockin'. I love your depiction of all the characters. It's so right-on, so intense, and I am able to look at them in a whole different way than what is normally shown. I immediately connected with Suguru, which is so opposite of who I usually connect with, Eiri. Anyway, I'm quite sidetracked, I am sorry. So, yeah, feel free to email me, if you want to. Other than that, keep on rockin' the AFF house. XP

That was cute! I highly approve of Shuichi's tactics in the game. It reminds me of some of the things I do. XD
I can't wait for the dressage contest!

Okay for starters....THIS IS SO FUCKING HOT! right spaz over. This is a really great story, it's inspired in me a love for BDSM that I never realised I could feel. It's taken 3 days to read it and I've loved every moment of it. The best about it is the fact that you've added all the links to explain things. I hope you can add another chapter soon 'cos I'm dying to see the rest of this!

I'm loving this story so muchh all! It's hard to find stories truely dedicaticated to BDSM. I'm kind of scared of that one girl that Shuichi bit. I hope she doesn't reveal Shuichi, Yuki, Suguru, and Hiro's sex-life to the public...or do I? Lol. ^__~ Love angst.
Also, is it true that suffocation can created a more intense climax?

Aww. That's so sweet, the ending of this chapter. I love how you write snuggling and caring in this story, and I love how Yuki's so nervous. It's cute. And Shuichi playing dirty at the game really WAS funny- XD I can certainly understand why everyone who saw him was laughing.

And Hiro...
...I wouldn't trade places with Hiro tomorrow if you paid me. Ouch.
I'm looking forward to the dressage contest- and congratulations on another fine chapter! It kept me up past my bedtime AND through the really cold part of the air conditioning. Luckily the sex was hot enough for me to stop shivering!