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October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A deep, sad piece, written with sweet and fluent style. I love it ^^
The best parts: "She woke my heart to endless grief. Love she had given me freely and I loved her in return" and the end, naturally. Yay for KaoruxKenshin!
Hope to hear more from you =3
The best parts: "She woke my heart to endless grief. Love she had given me freely and I loved her in return" and the end, naturally. Yay for KaoruxKenshin!
Hope to hear more from you =3
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow cool it was interesting will there be more? if there is can you email me with the title so i know you updated? well see you later!
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the line where his eye warmed with masculine pride at her pregant tummy that was very sweet.
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh thats cool. But is there a lemon? hee hee, I'm such a perv. But still, good uh..Kenshin thinking.
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oi inuneechan,
You know your the one that told me about this anime. Damn girl you were right !!! This story rocks!!!! You know your always able to caputure what they are saying and plca it on paper (this case cyber paper ). This is hs RAW thoughts , no embelishments, like if he was talking to us to let us know what he really feels. Thats where your talent is.... you can do that so freely. I hope you write more Kenshin, its one of your favs anyway. Thank you for writing good fic yet again.
InuSkye
You know your the one that told me about this anime. Damn girl you were right !!! This story rocks!!!! You know your always able to caputure what they are saying and plca it on paper (this case cyber paper ). This is hs RAW thoughts , no embelishments, like if he was talking to us to let us know what he really feels. Thats where your talent is.... you can do that so freely. I hope you write more Kenshin, its one of your favs anyway. Thank you for writing good fic yet again.
InuSkye