schedule
July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dude are you ever gonna post it?? i hope so
schedule
November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-Chapter in progress-
schedule
November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lots of typos, and it would be easier to read if there were spaces in between your paragraphs, but a nice start. I'm curious to see what you do next.
schedule
November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok well that was short. But now i have to wait for you to put a new chap up. Its good, but the cliffy leaves me in frustration. Well... alls i can say is that if your next chapter is as good as your first, you've got me hooked!