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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(flames)the story is good but some of the names aren't original like 'Kyoko" and "Kyo Summers?"I think kyo's girl form name should have been Kimari or something like that. Trust me on this I'm a story critic.X3.
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehe! Die, Yuki, die... er... what I mean is... I am so sorry, Yuki. Better luck next time. Mwahaha! Anyway, great chapter. I like the flashbacks.
Azar
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting take on the animal side of their curse. I do hope Yuki backs off. I don't particularly care for him, so I hope she ends up with Haru. I also hope that Yuki doesn't end up with Tohru either. She deserves better. Much better. I'm thinking Hatori.
Azar
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omigosh! i really enjoy reading this fic and i can't wait for the next chapter ^_^
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I normally don't read Fruits Basket fanfiction, but I was scanning that section of this site and came across your story. This is a very unique idea and I can't wait to see more. Great work.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... (That was) Truly an intriguing story... MUCH potential can be seen... Hopefully, you will be able to continue with such great plots building. Kyo as a girl is so cool! =D Update soon!
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool... an update. (Reviewer does update dance of joy). I like the chapter and how it flows. The Yuki and Rin parts are an interesting look into their characters. Are Kazuma, Haru, and Kyoko going to run eventually?
Azar
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!! I liked it!
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mm... updates. I like how you are slowly adding changes. The bit with Haru was a nice touch; he is my favorite Sohma. Also, I am curious as to what will happen when/if Tohru shows up. Further, there are hints that something truly horrible happened to Kyoko (as evidenced by her avoidance of Kazuma); yet, she seems not to remember the worst of it. It makes me wonder...
Ever Hopeful (For an Update),
Azar
Ever Hopeful (For an Update),
Azar
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very cute ^-^ I love the flow in which you wtite and I shall enjoy reading this, but I guess I willalways love Kyo just the way he is. Kyoko sounds like a great character, so good that maybe you could have even added her as a OFC instead. But don't mind me, I love the fic soplease continue to update! <3