rate_review Reviews

Nice! I'm liking how this is working...hope you continue soon! =^..^=

Kawaii! So adorable - I love Sanji giving Zoro special treatment and making Nami jealous - so sweet! Can't wait to find out what happens :D

It's good, but you should ignore Amanda's review up there, because it's Zoro, not Zolo. They changed his name to 'Zolo' in the crappy dub they made of one piece on cartoon network. O_o

mmm nummy. Are you gonna continue with the food theme? this seems promising but I'm not gonna say much cause it's not finished but still it's promising.

Pretty good concet. The story reads to quickly, you can fix this by working on elaboration. In otherwords, spend some time on each paragrah...set up the scene...describe the weather...or how the moon might refelct off Zoro's chest....you know, elaborte more. ^_^

Oh, and you are right to spell it "zoro", don't listen to that other reviewer. The original japanese name is Zoro, not Zolo. Stupid Forkids....grr....way to rape a wonderful series. Ah well...keep writing! You have some good beginings.^_^

wicked much better then my first try lol i love it hope u continue soon

I think "Zoro" is spelled Zolo.

Not bad for your first story ^_^ Keep it up!