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September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A little choppy, but I love the FAKE inclusion. I enjoyed it a lot!!! Keep writing there aren't enough PSOH stories out there!
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August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful crossover! Funny and sexy! So many funny things--JJ, the broken nail, the popsicles, Chris being puzzled . . . Great story!
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gods. That was so good. SO many things in one story and so looong. I love long stories. You sure made this one tickle my happy bone. =)
Great story my friend. *thumbs up* Thank you!
Great story my friend. *thumbs up* Thank you!
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And I thought I was the only one who could see a FAKE/Pet shop of horrors crossover.
This story was one of the best that I have read in a very long time. I thoroughly enjoyed every word from the very beginning. Well done.
This story was one of the best that I have read in a very long time. I thoroughly enjoyed every word from the very beginning. Well done.
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. A very entertaining read.
First let me say that I absolutely love the idea of a FAKE/PSoH crossover, and while I would have liked to see a plot more focused on a case, the way it focuses instead on Leon and D's relationship works really well! It was really really funny. I cracked up laughing out loud at several parts, even though I'm trying to be quiet and let people sleep... ;b
A few suggestions- this one chapter is really long, it might be easier to read if you broke it into separate chapters. Also, you have a few issues with grammar and typos; you might want to make sure to read over everything before you post it or have someone else look at it. Just to make everything that much better... =]
This story was really fun to read. Keep writing!
Qote of the day: “I’ve developed an odd craving for sugar.”
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First let me say that I absolutely love the idea of a FAKE/PSoH crossover, and while I would have liked to see a plot more focused on a case, the way it focuses instead on Leon and D's relationship works really well! It was really really funny. I cracked up laughing out loud at several parts, even though I'm trying to be quiet and let people sleep... ;b
A few suggestions- this one chapter is really long, it might be easier to read if you broke it into separate chapters. Also, you have a few issues with grammar and typos; you might want to make sure to read over everything before you post it or have someone else look at it. Just to make everything that much better... =]
This story was really fun to read. Keep writing!
Qote of the day: “I’ve developed an odd craving for sugar.”
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