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ack...farf and pony sex, I can not unsee it!

Other than brain bleachworthy event ;9 I'm rather enjoying this story quite a bit and hope you continue writing it. I really wish AFF had story notification! You write really well in a very clean even way that is easy to follow, no confusion as to which characters are speaking or what is going on with whom. I'll admit it some places they seem a little out of character they why I percieve them, but it is a far off beaten track from the anime series, and still enjoyable nontheless. I'm enjoying this as much as irondogs weiss fic and that is high praise :)

wow thaT was hot!!! I so glad your feeling a little better, or at least the drugs are making you think your feeling better. But I just want to say thank you for trying to finnish this story, I know it must be hard and if you need another 2 years to write the next chapter I'll still love this story.

Not because I intend to be a pain, but I'd like to know if you'll be posting any time soon. It'll be great. Just stop by to tell you I love this story and I'm not very sure if I had left a review before (just because most of the time I read till 4 am and I'm too sleepy to say something coherent). It'd be great if there was an update soon, especially because a new conflict begins. Hope you get the time. Nice work :)

Oh my good!!
I was doing nothing and I thought 'Maybe there's some upgrade on The sous-Chef' and voilá! Two more amazing chapters!!
I lvoed them.. are you posting any more soon??
GaB

After 19 chapters, I needed to gather my thoughts to even attempt a review...
The fact that I devoured 19 chapters in a day and half should say something in and of itself! I'm still trying to go back and pick out exactly how you nailed all the charatcerizations so effortlessly. I mean, every little twinge of character emotion was like a knife in my gut... I was just completely enthralled. So much bishie angst was really starting to make me edgy (not an easy thing to accomplish, btw...) and out you come with my now favorite line EVER. Yes, well timed snot is funny. Had me rolling on the floor and sooooo thankful for the perfectly time break in the angst. I love a pathetic Aya but your pathetic Ken was so... so... pathetic! And while I'm still not completely on the Farf X Aya bandwagon at least I'm paying attention and not cringing as I usually would. And the inclusion of Schu in the deception and his long standing deception with Youji was not only so Schu but actually dropped my jaw. Just when I thought he had truly changed... just goes to show... never trust a telepathic assassin. And I can't help but notice that everybody is getting some loving in here - even B side is getting it's turn (sheesh that Aya is a slut...) so WHERE'S BRAD'S?! Go... write... yes, I'm cracking the whip. :D

Very nice job on the latest chapter! My what lovely eyecandy you've given us with Chloe and Aya; but I was so thrilled to see Farf get at least the slightest whiff of another chance *holds up 'Farfie and Aya Forever' fangirl sign*. You've written all the pairings so well in this fic, bringing unique aspects to each of the relationships that just make them work. Lovely! I look forward to more, as usual!

I’m sorry I only have time to leave a short review. I’m supposed to be working. I discovered this gem of a story yesterday and darned near stayed up all night to read it. Sous Chef has an amazingly complex plot that continues to keep me guessing. Your descriptive writing skill is a pleasure to read and the characters are very well thought out and in depth.

I have never read a Farf/Aya fic before and I have to say Bravo!! It will be hard to find another that matches your skill in writing two complicated characters. Your view of the Weiss universe is completely enthralling and I could not tear myself away. It is so different from the usual Weiss Fanfics out there.

I simply can’t wait to read what happens next because I cannot even hazard a guess. You are very good at plot twists that keep me guessing and craving more. Again Wonderful job!

That's one hell of a cliffie. I can't wait to hear Farf's explanation myself. It sounds like everyone's relationship is in danger, Schuldig and Yohji, too. And, damn, while I still want Aya with Farfie, that thorny, rosy, viney sex with Chloe was hot.

hurray! another wonderfully done
chapter. and i never would have
thought to use roses and the vines
in that manner. very inventive. so,are
we going to find out what farf and schu
are up to in the next chapter. because
i plan on staying with this story until
it is finished. and i guess i have
no choice but to wait for the next
chapter. how my heart is breaking.

Ooh...the plot thickens! I'm as confused as Aya is at this point, which, in a way, is very telling of your talent. You've done an excellent job of giving us just enough information to keep us from floundering and getting frustrated, but not enough to actually know what the hell is going on! And, Aya's emotional conflict is exceptionally portrayed. I'm curious to know what's going on with Yohji because I'm sure that he's in some turmoil and probably not processing at his best just now. I hope that he and Aya get to talk sometime soon! It's getting harder and harder not to leave redundant reviews because you're so consistently good...but I'll try. Keep up the great work!! *kiss, kiss* *love, love*