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for The Sous-Chef

by redqueen

person Gossa
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Geez, wow! so much hot yummy drama stuff :) Chloe and Aya... yum. Chloe, Aya, and Yohji... yum. Farf and Aya? Who knew but... *drools*

Still loving the story. The wording, the hot yumminess, the surprises. You are one awsome writer. Keep it up! *cheers*
person JetMykles
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just read Chap 13. Holy Moley!! *bows in worship* thank you thank you thank you!! That was a wonderfully hot threesome. I can sleep happily now *bg*
person Duelriel
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it, please don't take too long for the next chapter! It's a totally awesome story, and I'm hooked. ^^
person Princess Sin
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh boy is this getting good. is it true? is farf and schu
up to no good or is it some other reason behind this. why
did you have to end it there. i need answers before i
go insane. but it's good to see aya back to his old self. but
how long will it last? i can't wait until the next chapter.
person krimson
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for giving me the heads-up on the new chapters. I have been savoring every word. This last one is a real doozy. I don't believe for a minute that Schu or Yohji are betraying Aya, but Farfie is quite the cipher. I expect, though, that even if he'd planned on betraying the three of them when this all started, he's got no plans to do it now. Maybe this bit of stepping back we saw this chapter is Farf looking for a little head space so he can extricate himself from his original plan of action and make a new plan.
person fyrbyrd
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That scream you heard earlier, that was me. Loud huh. Man oh man where to start. I know. Bloody fantastic. I was not expecting that! The bit with Farfy went by so fast, but with everything else it still stood out in my mind. I am really really looking forward to seeing what's going to happen next!
person Flamingolo
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This has to be one of the best WK fics I've ever read. Your characterizations are amazing, yet believably different, given time and other circumstances. I also never thought I'd end up loving the pairing of Aya and Farf, but you did it (though, with the latest chapter, I'm not sure how long the thing they've got going will last). Very rarely do I also enjoy a Yohji and Schu pairing as much as I have in this fic; you've managed to create a complex relationship that has really come to life. Excellent job, keep up the outstanding work!
person Morgan
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh you EVIL, EVIL person you!!! When you throw in a plot twist you don't do it halfway do you? Needless to say I can not wait until you post the next chapter. And that will be soon I hope. *whimper* There's a part of me that screamed in shock when it was revealed that Farf was heading up Inferno. I can't wait to find out exactly who & what Inferno is and how Farf is involved. And if Schu is involved.

I'm very interested in how Chloe fits into the scheme of things. Any chance the Aya & Chloe might end up in bed together? What can I say they are another favorite pairing of mine.

Thank you for sharing this fascinating story with us.

Morgan
person Blythe
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I'm still a little stunned. What an amazing chapter! Looks like things are about to get VERY interesting. I just hope that I can keep up! Extremely well-written chapter. A lot going on, but I never felt pulled in too many directions or confused. Also, great job at keeping the driving force behind this; the emotion and intensity are never lost. I'm keeping my fingers crossed that, whatever happens, Yohji and Aya will at least still be friends, 'cause that's just the kind of freak I am. I'll gleefully accept the villification of anyone else! Still, I trust you and whatever direction this takes, I'll be with you 'til the end! Truly, outstanding work!
person Gossa
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOO!!! a surprising turn of events! Can't wait for the next chapter, wonderful as always, and yay! Chloe!
*drools* more more.
and yum! Farfarello is still yummy as ever in this story :D

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